Reviews for Unexpected Occurrences
Stacy Damato chapter 14 . 9/29
Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 13 . 8/18
Thank you for this story. I just finished Chapter 14, and I loved it very much, but your last update was January 2013. I know it's been a long time, but I wonder if you could see your way thru to return and help Harry, Gibbs, Viktor and all the others, stop Dumbledore and Voldemort. At least, end Harry's 4th year on a high note?
misswitlock16 chapter 14 . 4/18
i love it hope you add more
SabannaLea chapter 14 . 2/25
Please update soon
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 14 . 7/13/2019
I love this story, but your last update was January 2013. Please, come back and help Harry, I mean Jesse, his father, and Viktor finish Jesse's story.
Xerox chapter 14 . 4/27/2019
When will u update this story
Guest chapter 14 . 2/25/2019
I LOVVVVVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZ
Guest chapter 14 . 12/31/2018
Please write more
spk chapter 13 . 12/21/2018
I just love this story and it's unique idea. Love both the pairing and Gibbs as his father. I sincerely hope you come back to it since we're coming up on 6 years. :)
bookwormgena1987 chapter 8 . 11/14/2018
Gibbs always goes for the understatedness (yes I am aware that word isn't a word but inteway I love this story keep up the great work) toodles!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 14 . 9/23/2018
A great story here so far! Looking forward to more!
PrinzessTinkerbell29 chapter 14 . 8/15/2018
Plz update ssssssssoon luved it¡
Jennifer chapter 14 . 7/26/2018
Love the story update soon.
Love2read23 chapter 14 . 7/15/2018
I know Harry/Jesse's clinginess is odd for one his age and the quickness he accepts a new name and a new dad and a bonded is all very unrealistic but really I just loce the cuddles. I thought it odd Harry immediately introduced himself t9 Jethro not as Harry Potter but just discovered as Lucus Jesse but as Luke but Jesse to family because it made it seem like Harry had always know he was Lucas Jesse Gibbs. I really like the name tho. Jesse is one of my favs. I like the bonding that though it can be misused and constraining with some, it makes it so no one can mess woth Harry. For example, I am gleeful just thinking how Viktor smacks down Snape. Ooh I'm mentally maniacally rubbing my hands just thinking about. And oh man, how Jethro shot Dumbledore's wand was brilliant. Thanks for writing.
CandiceHall5 chapter 14 . 7/12/2018
Love this. Please continue it.
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