WHAT? This can't be the end? ARgh you are soo mean! lol is there gonna be a sequel soon? :D

oh my bleeping god are you really gonna end it like that? oh please please please say there'll be a sequel or something cause geez...

This. Chapter. Was. AWESOME! The last lines were great, I could just see the TARDIS dancing with rock music! lol is Rose gonna have Phea soon? XD Seriously this chapter was sooo full of life and passion and just everything...augh! LOVE

poor john. shouldn't be that embarrassed over it cause god knows I would jump at the chance, just like rose! ;)

and i agree. u.s. completely stupid. too bleedin' PC.

bwahahahaha! omg i was ROLLING I was laughing so hard! oh that's brilliant it really is!

awww this was a cute chapter! Love the young TARDIS Really really can't wait for the next chapter, especially since I know what happens from Two and a Half Doctors! Update soon! XD

I don't understand at all why the Doctor had to do a horribly cruel thing like that to Rose, why on Earth? And I did like this chapter, the part he described using the phone was a nice touch. I really really want to read what happened when John went 'Round the bend'. I'm really interested, especially since you mentioned my favorite Doctor *gleams* :D Like how Donna reacted but John's was longer and more out of control, but yet not fatal...oh I'm just rambling, better stop here lol, great chapter! :D

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sorry just had to celebrate a bit!

That was amazing! Update soon! XD

oh, nice one. i can see why rose was upset about the TARDIS being changed.

and don't worry about juggling two stories, i know the feeling. i'm juggling four.

Hehe doctors in it now Good story

cool! it is always really funny when the psychic paper doesn't work!

i loved the Torchwood part. i like that she met jack. it was awesome. i don't even think there is that much i don;t understand in this story, i just feel confused without very good reason. oh well.

don't really understand, but loving it!

I'm confused and sad, but i like it!