Here I am, back nearly 3 years later.
Still really wish this thing was continued. :((

Leaving another review just to say that the analogy with a shogi game was absolutely brilliant, great work.

Hey, not sure if you'll read this review this time around, seeing as this was written so long ago, but if you are indeed reading this: PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY.

I realize that coming up with further plot into it gets tougher and tougher as the story progresses, but your writing style is insanely entertaining to read, and how you gradually, realistically get the pairing to work instead of making everything seem like a fairy tale is a skill only logical writers and readers can truly appreciate. You convey the emotions and thoughts of all the characters from their
own points of view in separate instances at the best parts, and even hint at characters theorizing the thoughts and motives of others, and it's explicitly fun to read. Your work is adored!

Thank you for reading.

I love this fanfic! 3

Please,please,please,please upload the next part. I want to see how this story ends so bad.

This fanfiction is really good.

I really hope that you upload a next part someday, cause this is the best fanfic that I have read about about this pair.

Keep up the good work :)

Dude you have to finish this one

WHERE ARE YOU!

Defending the afterlife from invading humans, a Quincy and a Shinigami equals oppression now? Are you joking? Please tell me you're not serious.

Terminalo

There are so few fics with these two as a pair please please PLEASE update

U need to finish this amazing story

This is my new crack! Seriously your story made my day!
Update soonish please - hum ok I know you haven't since 2011 but one is at liberty to believe in miracles, right? *.*

What the hell are you doing? This story is excellent and has got more than enough reviews for any author to continue writing! If you'ven't been living under a rock or something, update the story! I love this story and I love the relationship between Harribel and Toshiro! If you are still out there, is this fanfic going to be a romance between these two, cos' I don't think it's going to turn out that way; is it going to be the relationship where they have a deep bond and are close things and would sacrifice themselves for the other (and I don't mean romantically). Overall, this is a really good fanfic and I won't have a grudge on you if you don't update (but I will be disappointed), but if you do, some constructive critisism would be to tone down the swearing (the moment where she screams to get the f**k out was good, as well as the damn bits, but I don't like fanfics that swear constantly). Anyway, I just want to say thank you for posting this fic and am keeping my fingers crossed for that new chapter!

your so Cruel how could you stop here

This is so well done. I like how you describe, in the first few lines, the hypocrisy of the soul society's justice system and how Harribel laments briefly about no one being arrested and tried for her fracciones brutal killing. Also the unsurprising hostility Harribel displays towards Toshiro reads like a novel. You should resume this work of art soon, please don't leave it in limbo! it's that awesome!