Oh man... I really enjoyed your story, but Complete is a bit missleading. Why don't you declare it on hitatius?

what the actual fuck.
thats where you end it?
fucking ridiculous!
i was so excited for them to finally kiss.

What?! Ugh, technically it is completely updated, as far as the original author has posted, but ugh! The fic isn't complete!

I've got tears in my ears from lying on the floor laughing.

Had anyone ever finished this story? Did ypu ever find out what happened to the author? And thanks for posting it again. I check every few years to see if it's been updated. Hope will always be there!

LOL so hard I fall and ROFL.

Oh chapter 20 really made me laugh I needed that, still a shame there will never be an ending to this story but it's still worth the read.

I think I may have laughed harder than Ze in this chapter.

I find it funny that they try and block people from copying text considering if someone is going to plagiarize content there going to do it, even if they have have to transcribe it.

Where as there are valid reasons for wanting to copy the text, dyslexic? Having the background coloured can help with that. Want to put it in a Text to speech program because you want to listen and do something else at the same time. etc etc etc and that will actually stop people doing those legitimate things.

Fortunately if you have any computer know how its trivial to get around the protection... I my self am both dyslexic and read FF in a text to speech program, it took me all of about 2 minutes to think about how to by-pass the copy protection, and then a couple of chapters to think of a way of doing it efficiently.

Btw chappy is 10/10 wish mental had finished it, or even just if she had let us know if she was doing a real book etc.

I like your story so much!
there is just this tiny detail that makes it hard to read for me.
In my mother tongue (dutch) 'Ze' means 'she'. I have never had any problem reading english, but when you go and mix them up... it's just really really weird

Oh. Oh no. NO PLEASE. My day off was rainy and bleak so I read this all day - seriously. I did nothing but lay down and read this story. I got so into it and absolutely loved your take on Sirius and the whole thing. Now there's no ending?! No! At least write that in the summary so this doesn't happen to someone else, please. "Done writing but story unfinished" or something!

Thank you so much for posting this. I was looking for this fic everywhere. I've greatly enjoyed rereading what was up and finishing the chapters that I hadn't gotten to yet. I really wish there were an ending. Do you have any idea why it was taken down on HPFF? Again, thanks so much!

How can you not have any chapters? I was loving your story. You just can't stop writing. Please PLEASE go on!

nooooo...i want the rest...please dont do this to me...
please u just write it...i want it...

You should put in the summary that the story was discontinued. Especially cause its so long its a bit annoying to discover that it has been discontinued. I'm not blaming you at all but just a small bit of advice. :-)

What I don't understand is that the little Description at the end of chapter 40 by the original author describes how there is only a few chapters left which is pretty obvious by the way it seems to be coming to a close. Why didn't they just finish it. And you have to mark this as incomplete that was just cruel.