Reviews for What Weighs Upon the Heart
windyshenz chapter 1 . 4/1/2019
Loved the story, as well as your writing. Man, I really needed this after the sub par ending the show left us with. As far as I'm concerned, this is the true canon ending.

Thank you!
Jess chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Ah, closure. A perfect read after marathon-ing the complete tv series.
yamiduke13 chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
This was wonderfully done. I hate the ending of the series and I really wish they had done more. I think you did a fantastic job with this. They were all incredibly in character and you made me very happy.
Gatoconbotas964 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I only recently learned of Cybersix, but I found this to be nicely written even though I don't know all the details of the series. The narration and descriptions flow very well. The characterizations seem natural as well.
Bittu chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Beautifully written. i wish it was longer! Lol
Remnant Stars chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
I loved this show! And to read such a well written fanfic about it both surprises and delights me. I hated the ending of the show a little. It was so uncertain and yet it was hopeful. You did a good job of showing what might have happened after! Thanks for this story!
Civilized Monster chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Gosh, I swear, I don't think I've ever read a Cybersix Fanfic as wonderful and as aesthetically pleasing as yours!

You have a very original type of writing- it's really a breath of fresh air in this genre. I'm glad to have come across this piece, as I was not disappointed with that I read. I do hope you continue this story; it has so much potential and could really turn into a great story!

I enjoy how you give attention to the very small details that give us both character, atmosphere and visualization. (i.e: "He groans again, a throbbing rumble too deep for a purr and too affectionate for a growl." and the mentions of the police sirens and how they flash dangerously over the walls.)

Though the theme was dark and lonely, you gave it an air of friendliness, a dependent personality that matches that of Lucas; you gave references, made subtle jokes and introduced a beautiful nostalgia.

The way you handled Lori was terrific as well, and something I applaud you for.

Overall, a great read that I would really like to see (and encourage) continue!

-CM
Nahau Moondust chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Lucas is more than a friend to Cyber six.
Dakyloquacious chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
-flaaaaaail-

:D

This is what happens when I neglect certain archives. A great fic pops up and I nearly get a heart attack.

Seriously, prose is solid, characterization and interaction is just spot-on, and I'm just incredibly /happy/. Fr srsly.
Mitoki-hime chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
awsome story, i hope you write a secod chapter if you don't mind,your writing style is very original and i love itXD
Nixariel chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Yes yes yes! Good Cybersix fanfic! There's so little of it out there, unfortunately. I really liked the way you dealt with Lori - convenient but not implausible. And Data-Seven as a protective brother made me smile. Honestly, I don't know why so many fanfics in this section insert OCs when there is so much that could be done with only the canon characters. I hope you write more for Cybersix; your style is a breath of fresh air.