| Reviews for What Weighs Upon the Heart |
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windyshenz chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 Loved the story, as well as your writing. Man, I really needed this after the sub par ending the show left us with. As far as I'm concerned, this is the true canon ending. Thank you! |
Jess chapter 1 . 7/16/2015 Ah, closure. A perfect read after marathon-ing the complete tv series. |
yamiduke13 chapter 1 . 2/3/2015 This was wonderfully done. I hate the ending of the series and I really wish they had done more. I think you did a fantastic job with this. They were all incredibly in character and you made me very happy. |
Gatoconbotas964 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013 I only recently learned of Cybersix, but I found this to be nicely written even though I don't know all the details of the series. The narration and descriptions flow very well. The characterizations seem natural as well. |
Bittu chapter 1 . 7/3/2013 Beautifully written. i wish it was longer! Lol |
Remnant Stars chapter 1 . 2/26/2013 I loved this show! And to read such a well written fanfic about it both surprises and delights me. I hated the ending of the show a little. It was so uncertain and yet it was hopeful. You did a good job of showing what might have happened after! Thanks for this story! |
Civilized Monster chapter 1 . 6/9/2012 Gosh, I swear, I don't think I've ever read a Cybersix Fanfic as wonderful and as aesthetically pleasing as yours! You have a very original type of writing- it's really a breath of fresh air in this genre. I'm glad to have come across this piece, as I was not disappointed with that I read. I do hope you continue this story; it has so much potential and could really turn into a great story! I enjoy how you give attention to the very small details that give us both character, atmosphere and visualization. (i.e: "He groans again, a throbbing rumble too deep for a purr and too affectionate for a growl." and the mentions of the police sirens and how they flash dangerously over the walls.) Though the theme was dark and lonely, you gave it an air of friendliness, a dependent personality that matches that of Lucas; you gave references, made subtle jokes and introduced a beautiful nostalgia. The way you handled Lori was terrific as well, and something I applaud you for. Overall, a great read that I would really like to see (and encourage) continue! -CM |
Nahau Moondust chapter 1 . 4/22/2011 Lucas is more than a friend to Cyber six. |
Dakyloquacious chapter 1 . 2/27/2011 -flaaaaaail- :D This is what happens when I neglect certain archives. A great fic pops up and I nearly get a heart attack. Seriously, prose is solid, characterization and interaction is just spot-on, and I'm just incredibly /happy/. Fr srsly. |
Mitoki-hime chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 awsome story, i hope you write a secod chapter if you don't mind,your writing style is very original and i love itXD |
Nixariel chapter 1 . 12/2/2010 Yes yes yes! Good Cybersix fanfic! There's so little of it out there, unfortunately. I really liked the way you dealt with Lori - convenient but not implausible. And Data-Seven as a protective brother made me smile. Honestly, I don't know why so many fanfics in this section insert OCs when there is so much that could be done with only the canon characters. I hope you write more for Cybersix; your style is a breath of fresh air. |