I still can't believe that this is happening either! I agree with Sara, just who is this person who seems to have a grudge against the LVPD!?

OMDG! Why do I get the feeling that Greggo's on to something about this officer Stevens?

Ah, if this story was a CSI tv Episode it would definitely be one of the great ones from either seasons 9-11!

Uh Oh! Now what? What's happened to my poor dear sweet Greggo? Like the others, I too thought he had just fallen asleep the break-room table that he's seated at! Now even I'm starting to wonder!

OMDG! Thankfully, Greggo's sense of humor is intact!

OMDG! Here we go!

Plot within a plot within a plot - this is wonderfully complex and a good read.

I think it was great that Greg confided in Nick - nice work on that scene. Nick handled it well and Greg's nervousness is perfectly understandable. I am curious to see how the bombing turns out.

Ooh, I love the wonderful twists and the addition of yet another plot within a plot. Has me hooked in completely at this point.

I like how Sara evades answering Nick's question and giving away what Greg told her in confidence. The cliffhanger at the end of this chapter definitely has my heart pounding.

It is nice how you show that, though time has passed since he was held hostage, Greg is still not yet completely emotionally whole after it. He has made some progress, as is evidenced by being able to be in close proximity to Ray without feeling like bolting. Nice graveyard type humor as well with the comment that Greg made about evidence.

Nice build-up of suspense, and great cliffhanger at the onset. Looking forward to reading on.

Still reading! Fantastic job!

good stories! love the whole series you got going on. Not to long not to short easy to read! maybe more details buts its not like we can't understand it. great work!