Giratina strikes me as the sort of villain who wouldn't be phased by any sort of punishment. Seems like his response would be to get in one last taunt to get under everyone's skin while confidently proclaiming that they will look to him for aid again. It would serve to leave the heroes thoroughly unsettled even in victory.

These are some wonderful stories. They have a nice mix of inspiring , sad, and poignant. I can't seem to stop reading.

this is...
Wow.
I really love these two pokemon, and their dynamics; and you went and ...
Really. You are amazing. this is the most AWESOME potrayal of Canalave stories I have seen in a long while.
also, would you be able to do a story about Deoxys? i was always curious about that particular one.

Awesome fic! Whoo-ra!

I have some requests. Why there are no Pokémon in the Orre desert, or something about Toy Pokémon. Either one should be fun.

This chapter was SOOO creepy. It almost gave ME nightmares! Anywho, best fiction EVAAAR, and Victini would be a great idea, tell how and why he got locked in the bottom of the lighthouse. Hey, could you do one for the Old Chateau? I've been trying to figure out that place's story forever, but all I've managed to uncover is a couple of ghosts (butler in kitchen, girl leaving bedroom).

oh god. chapter 14 CHANGED MY SOUL :0 it's so SAD..!

Arceus damn it this thing deserves moar reviews! *tries to spam review* Maybe I'll review the chapters I didn't review yet... hmm...

Anyways, lovely story! I'm surprised (with all the lulz and stuff, thanks btw for the shoutout) that you were able to write such a Poe-ish chapter. I must...work harder! XD Still though, tis impressive imo to write emotion other than what you are currently feeling. I really had a dark, cultish feeling as I read this bwahaaahaaaa *as I read by the light of a single (urgh, double, gotta turn that other light off) lamp*

I'm SOOOOOOO glad you updated though! This is pure AWESOMENESS!

Wow, this was such a great chapter, and so insightful! The descriptions were gorgeous, and the three Pokemon reminded me of that discussion we'd had XD. I especially liked how you still tied them in with the lightning, fire, and rain that happened at the time of the burning. And Lugia's wrath is a sight to behold. Usually, Ho-oh's the angry one, but there's just something about Lugia getting angry, since she gets angry so rarely.

Ah, those three pranksters. Ah, well. I like how humans are not always the bad guys in your stories, as opposed to the cliche of Pokemon having pure hearts, humans being evil spawn of Giratina. Oh yeah, is Giratina the Strange One? It's been a while since I read that chapter, and I'm too lazy to go back and read it so I'll ask you. Hey, it takes less than a second to type an answer XD

Oh yeah, and thanks for the shoutout. :D

Hmm, creepy, but got confusing near the end. Was his Cubone mutilated by the one in the legend?

Still, good chapter. Update soon.

Wow, great chapter!

This was really good! Keldeo's been one of my favorites since I first saw it!

Nice. That part about the Litwick devouring souls spooked me. This was a good chapter.

Wow, this was one of my favorite chapters yet! It gave attention to both theories as to Kyurem's origins and made the battle of the brothers even more epic than before. :)

Wow, this was a nice chapter! I really like these stories!

An excellent story, sad but with the whimsical fairytale ending that is so often seen in traditional mythology. Good work!