This story is written so well! Will you ever finish it?

Hahaha man, I forgot how much I love your story. After I finished rereading Majin Tantei Nougami Neuro again, I immediately began to reread Balance. I must admit that I've already read this story like 5 times before this, even though I think this is the first review I've left over the years. Sorry about that -_-"".
Anyway, I just wanted to say how much I love and appreciate your story (even if it'll never be finished). Your characterization is always on point, I don't think anyone else in this fandom can be as true to these characters as you have been. And your arcs are fantastic and entertaining. I feel like I could imagine nearly all of this happening in the manga instead of just a fan fiction. And with how small and overlooked this fandom/manga/anime is, it's all the more impressive to have good literature among the works.
I especially love the whole Commitee subplot with Neuro and his new "kingdom". It's so funny just how seriously he takes being their ruler lol. It's one of my favorite arcs! Though then again, I don't think this story has any bad arcs in it, so picking a favorite is kind of a moot point.
Man I wish more people knew about this fandom. Because the manga is just SO GOOD! I can't believe that they never even tried to sell it in America . So I'll never be able to buy the book set in my language (crys). Oh well. I'll probably end up just buying the Japanese books one day just to have them. I heard there was an anime about the show too but from the 2 eps that I watched, it wasn't very good. It's honestly tragic bc if this fandom was bigger that others would be able to read this masterpiece of a story and maybe you would have continued it then. But that's in the past now and it is what it is.
Anyway it's about time I rap up this long review lol. Thanks so much for this amazing story! I'll probably end up reading it over and over and over again through out my lifetime ( I've been reading this story for quite a few year now) and never be bored with it. Thanks again and if you ever decide to continue it, know that I'll be there as one of the most loyal and enthusiastic fans! Have a great day!

Great story!

Um, you know you said that this case was taking place in England in this chapter, right? You've also been giving a LOT of places non-Japanese names. You also forgot to mention in the newspaper article that there were three murders, not two. I also didn't get the feeling that over a month had passed since the first murder, which was also something mentioned in the newspaper article.

Considering all these cases are in Japan, I feel like you're having too many characters be foreigners. A few foreigners here and there I could see, but you've been making around 3/4 of the characters you've introduced be foreigners. I still like this story a lot, I just wanted to share that thought with you. Also, when Yako grabbed Todoroki's arm and asked to talk to her, you put Ishigaki's name instead. I only know you used the wrong name due to context clues.

What a group! I feel bad for Yako, even though I find it funny as well!

I just realized something. Wouldn't the people of the community notice that neither Neuro nor Yako have wedding rings on? I still think this is the best MTNN story I've found so far, I just wanted to point out that little detail.

I like this story so far, but if each of the prisoners had half the bones in their bodies broken, wouldn't they still be in the hospital having their bones fixed?

OMG, I swear Neuro POVs are hilarious, I haven't had that much fun reading in a while, thank you.

I really liked Ishigaki's POVs. As well as the mystery surrounding him and his "brothers."

Noooooooooo, where's the next chapter?

waitttttttttttt...Did Neuro unknowingly thought about going on a date with Yako?

I love how you showed Neuros personality XD! I like how you put it in different povs.

Could it possibly be Season 5, Episode 12 of Doctor Who?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!
This is even better than the anime in my opinion. That and it's rare for me to read anything with more than 20 chapters. Anyway this is awesome please continue

Kira is by far the best character ever written in history!