Reviews for Fine Lines
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
So lovely!
HeathRowTottie chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Another great story and yet another contender for the best last line ever!
mc chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
So beautiful, I just love this story so much... You are amazing. Please don't stop.
Ambur chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
This was very, very lovely...I enjoyed it very much.
snayl chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Beautiful. Thank you so much.
Jei Hua Mae chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Apparently I haven't reviewed this story (here, anyway, I might've elsewhere), but I didn't want to repeat myself since I HAD to gush about it again. This is the 5th or 6th time that I've read this and I keep getting bowled over by how good it is. The good fiction never dies and is always relevant. It made sense when I first read it, it continued to fit when I came across it again in the last few years, and now when it's been about 2 or 3 weeks since Kathryn Erbe guest starred on SVU saying that Bobby "moved on" it STILL fits into the LOCI universe as a plausible event in the lives of our favorite detectives.

The way you captured the range of feelings-all of them and not just the lovey-dovey ones which is a tendency in ff-makes this SO realistic and unbelievably timeless in it's telling. Even though it was set in a very specific point in the series, Goren and Eames are at its core which makes it incredibly accurate no matter when I've read it. Their feelings for each other don't seem to die and neither does this ship!

Thank you for capturing that in a story!
insubordinationfreak chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
I really feel as though I owe you one for all these stories. Seriously, call on it at any time.
luvztoritegmail.com chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Wow, I love the picture you painted. This was a terrific story and completely believable as a sequel to Loyalty.

LindaC
OuroborosSnyder chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Another great installment! Loved the way you ended this.

~Snyder~
Medea Callous chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Oh what a treat, another fic from you! This was so perfect, so beautiful. I love how you write them, it seems very real and believable to me.
hippysheep chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
OMG!you think up of the cleverest stories..simple yet hits the mark in all of us..thank you for this beautiful writing
CycloneT chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
I really can't articulate exactly how much I loved this story, other than to say oh wow, I freakin' loved it! Just...everything was so beautifully written. I'm in awe of what you did here. I loved the storyline, I loved that you kept them in character, I loved that I could picture everything so clearly in my head, I loved that you kept it real, and I loved that it played out exactly how it should. Thank you for an amazing read.
LadyBlueDevil86 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
So great! Thanks for another wonderful story and the promise of a happy outcome for G/E!
JustAGirlIGuess chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Theres only one way I can say this...this was amazing writing. I loveeeed it
Teribin chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Lovely.
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