Great story! I think your writing of everyone was incredibly in-character, and you captured their various relationships with Kurt brilliantly. My favorite was definitely Puck's. I think you nailed his way of caring about something but wanting to seem too cool to say so. Really excellent writing.

Oh, wow. Beautiful. Not necessarily all the characters I was expecting when I read the prompt, but you picked them perfectly. I loved it.

really angsty, but good

This was amazingly written. Everyone was completely in character. I loved it!

Whoa! I saw this prompt on livejournal, and you did such an amazing job filling it! I think you got down everyone perfectly, and you did an awesome job creating such a depressing an hopeless mood. Fantastic work!

This was an excellent story! Everyone was in character and it was SO well written. I really enjoyed it!

Great story. I really like your choice of POVs.

Constructive Criticism: use "..." when people are talking. '...' is used when people are thinking. So it makes it confusing for the reader, and takes away from the story when we have to adjust and remember that the words are being spoken aloud.

Other than that, this was really good. You did a wonderful job with each person's personality. You had them in character; alot of people have trouble with that. But you pulled it off. Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing.

This story is very well written, I wish I could keep reading on and on and on.

Wow... I'm speechless. It's really really well written and very in character. I think I forgot to breath while reading it!

Thank you for sharing it!

Really nicely done.

I especially like Sam's very subtle approach and the way he walks Kurt to class and looking out for Kurt without being obvious about it. Kurt really strikes me as the type who doesn't really know how to accept help from others easily, and would be mortified by having "secret service"-esque protection as suggested on the show. But in this instance Sam turns it around so it isn't so obvious that's what he's up to. (Obv. Kurt's pretty smart and suspects/probably knows, but it's a very sweet gesture...)