| Reviews for In a Blink of an Eye |
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   cityangel chapter 1 . 12/13/2010 Great story, but check for grammatical errors and typos also, it being the 18th century, the speech used in the story was too modern. other than that, its a really good idea! |
| roblover2 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010 Great story. Just need to edit before you post. Spelling, incorrect words. Good luck with future stories. |
| vanilfrappe chapter 1 . 12/8/2010 Well, what a perfectly delicious story! I loved every little detai of it. Your characters were charming, witty, and very likeable. Especially Edward. And I must say the sex was nicely described. I'm surprised they didn't figure it out earliar, but it still ended well! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! |
| DravenDarkwyr chapter 1 . 12/5/2010 Love it! |
| twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010 Loved it! |
| bundleb chapter 1 . 12/1/2010 LOVE IT |
| suemason chapter 1 . 11/29/2010 That was great, I loved it, so sweet. |
| team edward chapter 1 . 11/28/2010 that was a nice story. and I love happy endings. well done |
| x-Silly-Caitlin-x chapter 1 . 11/28/2010 It was good but you need to go over it because there were a lot of grammatical errors and typos. Also they wouldn't have had fake diamonds so use the word crystals instead. They also wouldn't use phrases like OMG and piece of cake so I'd change that too. |
| robfans chapter 1 . 11/28/2010 aww that was so sweet |
