Thank you for making this a naruto story with little naruto seeing ghosts which I wish there was more naruto stories with naruto seeing ghosts.

Actually naruto should have DOMINATED taijutsu.. "intercepting fist" ONLY works with the sharringan, without it, it's a worthless fighting style and sasuke DOESN'T have it... Sasuke MIGHT have won against NORMAL people, but against one trained by the dead? He has no chance. (especially NOT against a jinchuriki that has unlimited stamina!).. It's kinda obvious isn't it?.. It's why taijutsu (regardless of the style, is kinda WORTHLESS against the bijuu... Every hit kills the attacker, and doesn't even SCRATCH the defender).

Well here is ONE of the problems with the naruto verse.. In canon it can be assumed that the clan heads didn't know who naruto was (as in they didn't help him) because they'd NEVER BEEN AROUND HIM... But now, you say they have... They'd HAVE to know about his connection to minato and kushina (he just LOOKS/ACTS too similar for them NOT too know) and thus the "secret" is out (it was pointless anyway.. In fact, it's BEYOND pointless, it's counter-productive.) The naruto story is a MINEFIELD, especially the beginning, because it MAKES NO SENSE and it becomes even further GARBLED later on, when more "history" is written, screwing up EVERY time-table and making the village turn into complete IDIOTS and EVIL IDIOTS at that! Mostly because in the BEGINNING of the series, it was all just "slapped together" without any thought of cohesion, because it was just meant to "hurry up and get naruto out on missions". Then as the series started getting LONGER it needed a stronger "base", so history was added, but without any effort of "revising" the original beginning or without taking it into account.

FUCK that hiding stuff... Doesn't he get ENOUGH of it already? "who to trust, whom not too"?

So how does keeping secrets and "not telling him" things HELP him? Isn't that just more the IDIOT third's mentality bleeding through? I'd go with "BOOM, here is everything that has, is and will be hidden from you, every SECRET and no-so-secret of your world... A BUFFET STYLE of everything, what you choose to do with it is up to you... Savior, or Destroyer!".

Really? I thought the hokage was HIGH as a kite MOST of the time with his decisions. (seriously not MANY of them make sense... Leaving danzo alive? WHY? Other then a possible "scapegoat" for future screw ups.. There is NO REASONABLE reason.. Hiding naruto's heritage?.. Only reason is giving the village a "scapegoat" again... the academy's stupidity?.. Well that one has NO apparent reason... ALL his decisions seem completely contradictory and really, really STUPID (so high).

Naive naruto? Really? How is that even POSSIBLE? ANY kid (well, okay MOST kids) are going pick up on whats going on... Especially without "loved ones" or parents to coddle them through those days... Ninja kids especially, remember that kakashi was WORKING (literally WORKING) for the village and killing, stealing and everything at AGE 5! Naruto in MOST of these FF stories, the author doesn't get to give "innocence" or childhood... They come out of the WOMB basically "teenagers"... (and naruto is even MORE of a badass mix then ALL of them)... He actually SHOULD be "part demon" from before he was BORN.

Since naruto can talk too ghosts, "eventually".. would TECHNICALLY mean after the third is DEAD you know! He doesn't HAVE to tell the third ANYTHING while he's ALIVE... The promise still holds. Also that bit with "hokara" saying she'd KNOW?.. The logical implication means, the "ghosts" can be ANYWHERE/EVERYWHERE and can tell naruto, meaning NO SECRET is safe from him... I'd think that would PANIC the "old man" a lot more then anything else. THIS IS BEFORE we get into what those spirits could DO to him once he INEVITABLY dies... (he's OLD, older then dirt.. if he suddenly KNOWS FOR A FACT his "afterlife" is SCREWED? Shouldn't he be trying EVERYTHING too "fix this" before he dies?)

Good story so far, but there is one slight logistics hiccup.. Obitedo isn't dead! Never has been, just went bat-shit crazy, like ALL uchiha eventually do. "curse of hatred" my left big toe, it's an INHERITED "mental flaw". (probably due to too much inbreeding). The line has "rotted" from the inside out.

By the way, on the whole "time-lines don't add up"... Thing that naruto is NOTORIOUS for... It took 38 minutes for kakashi too describe a 13 minute conversation! How does that work? He could repeat it VERBATIM(twice.. at the same shocked speed) and it wouldn't take so long. (all time-lines in naruto just BREAK DOWN apparently!) (I think the problem most authors have, is things can take SECONDS or minutes... Depending on the wit of the persons involved, and the situation *sometimes even less then EITHER*). It's one of the reasons I categorize the people of konoha as being PARTICULARLY slow in mental acumen. Not only to they usually need DIRECTLY stated, IN GREAT DETAIL, things that should be glaringly obvious in order to realize them.. But they need...it...explained...very...slowly...preferably with small words. (jutsu, techniques, life choices, fighting styles, codes *almost a waste of time there*, history, and even what's CURRENTLY AROUND THEM)... They "seem" too need how to THINK, "spoon fed" to them by someone else.

Shouldn't it have been the OTHER WAY ROUND with the whole "she was glad she had minato teach her some seals"? She's the UZUMAKI and CANON, they were FAMOUS for their sealing..(the ENTIRE CLAN) so really if anyone taught anything, she'd have been teaching HIM! (SHE'S the one from an important clan, has a bloodline and is direct descendant of the sage... Minato? Not so much on ANY of those things). I guess you could go with the ever popular fan theory that minato was a BASTARD of tsunade's... But that really doesn't work on many levels. (like he's a little too OLD to be her kid, that and her not remembering him... *memory seals don't really WORK when your talking about people that eat seals for BREAKFAST* and he wouldn't be counted as an orphan then. Plus there would be ABSOLUTELY no REASON for the deception, PLUS, if it was done then NOBODY would buy that whole "naruto is an orphan" bit.. Not twice in as many generations. The people of konoha are DUMB, nearly PSYCHOTICALLY dumb.. But they'd HAVE to put that together at least -they DO, supposedly, get up every morning without mortally wounding themselves!) Really minato was just one LUCKY s.o.b. (or maybe it was just "PAVING the way" for naruto... OR minato was being "fattened up" for sacrifice. Kinda like jiriyia, I mean the man CAN fight, but he's NOT any type of "super spy" or "spymaster" and he probably would have been killed MANY TIMES OVER, but according to prophecy, he HAS to teach naruto *however briefly*, so he HAD to live that long, afterwards? Well his LUCK has officially EXPIRED! Might be why he stayed AWAY during naruto's childhood, I mean think about it, once he taught naruto the FIRST thing... His "get outta death" card is cashed in!

The only people that the third is "hiding" naruto from is the people that DON'T GIVE A CRAP about minato and want him for the kyuubi (which he is HORRIBLE at hiding).. It's NOT bloodlines, that villages care about, NOT ONE EVEN "ATTEMPT" is done on sasuke... (even though he's the "last" member!).. None "SWOOPS UP" haku... even though she's the last member... The third is just a MORON.. Who hides people from assassins from half-way round the world in their STRONGHOLD, but EXPOSES him to killers NEXT DOOR?

The whole "keep naruto's identity secret".. is JUST DUMB in NORMAL canon.. If he can see in the dead and learn from them? It becomes COMPLETELY POINTLESS. I mean if someone (anyone) tells him the "big secret", what can the hokage do? They are DEAD! He's can't even SEE them, let alone do ANYTHING AT ALL too them. It's POINTLESS to try to "police" them, they are DEAD, thus BEYOND anything the living world wants! There is NOTHING either side has the other wants to deal with this! They'd tell naruto, because: it amuses them, because they are family, because they feel he was wronged... TAKE YOUR PICK!1

"hide naruto" only became a even STORY idea, if you consider the "masked man" which was an uchiha.. Which because he has the nine-tails, and the masked man KNEW FOR A FACT naruto lived..He could NEVER be hidden from anyway. (minato just didn't HAVE any other enemies)! Not anymore then any other (if they took revenge on naruto for minato? Then NO ninja ANYWHERE would EVER have any kids... EVER and then there would be no ninja!)

The sex scenes in a lot of your work is ok.. But the OVER-INFLATION of tits/dicks.. is just crude.. I'd never watch and anime done like that.. Granted some of the girls have chests bigger then their head.. And it's physically impossible, but the exaggeration you portray is just not even visually appealing. and the dicks? What kick a guy in his knee and you put him down like a kick to the groin? That makes no sense (not to mention the BLOOD LOSS, if he got a hard-on with that.. he'd not have blood for anywhere else). Proportions are what you gotta remember (naruto and all the others are BASICALLY just ideas wearing "skins" that the audience can identify with..that they know)... so Make them FIT THAT.. Behavior doesn't matter, you can have them behave however you want.. it's your story but just remember they are wearing "skins"...

THERE IS NO FLIPPIN HARUNO CLAN SO CUT THE BS

I am sorry to hear that. My condolences to the family. He had wonderful storytelling abilities and an active imagination to grow them.