What a great story. It was tragic, angsty, and heartwarming at the same time.

Wow... really really awesome! I like the darkpart, ok but Im a little freak becouse I really like tragedys and Characterdeath and I dont know Im a little weirdo, so i must like the darkpart ;) But back to the story, really great i like the POV from InuYasha... its so dramatic, ok mabe hes a little OOC but its AU so i guess its no problem :D I also like your writingstyle and yeah, awesome story (Ohoh i start to repeat myself, sorry ) I think thats it.
Thanks for the Story i really enjoyed reading it :D

Maggy-chan
P.S. If there is any mistake in the Text sorry im from Germany :P

Oh! I love this little story! Its so kawii! Even with the dark begining! Its going in my favorites!

PP: Sorry for not reviewing immediately! *cries*

MIROKU: PP probably would've put a humorous convo in here, had this not been so depressing. *prays*

SANGO: *hits Miroku with Hiraiko - I mean, Kirara*

MIROKU: OWWWW! SANGO!

KIRARA: *mew*

SANGO: THAT was for going against my religion. *Shinto-Sango walks off with growling Kirara*

BUDDHIST-MIROKU: o.O

No, but this was so sweet in a beautifully angsty kind of way! . A little too short and quick for my tastes, but I enjoyed it, nonetheless! :D Just reading the first part, I could feel Inuyasha's emotions and nearly burst into tears over how broken he seemed. D: And the flashbacks nearly had me biting my nails in anxiety whereas seeing Souta's death scene made me want to sob pathetically and roll in my bed to cry myself to sleep. (You get the idea. ;P) But I'm glad Kagome and the gang got to him on time, and there was a happy ending, especially with their son having "Souta" as his middle name! . This was a good read, and I'm definitely now a fan of your angsty, 1st-person fics! :D

i liked it, good job. keep writing, you have it in you.

ahh..i am soo glad you changed it because for a moment there..i was beginning to feel EXTRA deppressed lol. i loved it! (:

The drama is great love the plot the end made me happy

LOL thank you" (_)

Another perfect story! :) A little angst but perfect!