Aw, it was just getting really good. But seeing that it's been nearly 6 years since you updated it's safe to assume that we'll never see this finished.

This story needs to be finished, it's too good to leave it like this. Please it had such a great start.

I love where you are going with this story and I hope you decide to continue it at some point. You paint a good story.

Dude this is a really good book but when's the next chapter

Only three chapters? Awwww...

I really love this story so far! It's very creative and I'm so eager to read more. Your version of Link is fantastic, and I love the intricacy and mystery of his past –- I just can't wait to learn more about him.

I really hope you plan on continuing this story. It's been a while, but I'd love to read more. Whenever you decide to update, I'll be here waiting. Might not review though... I'm not the kind of person who reviews every chapter. But I promise I'll read it and surely enjoy it! And, you know, maybe I will review, just because I love this fic so far. You've got a fabulous writing style and an exciting plot. And, wow, 26 reviews on 3 chapters. That's absolutely incredible.

You've got something really special. Hope you plan on updating soon! Good luck! :D

Meh. No real errors, besides a handful very minor grammatical ones. And trust me, if a critial grammar-bitch like me says it's minor, it's MINOR.

Then again, I don't think I'd care anyway. Am getting seriously attached to this story already. I love your writing style (so clean and descriptive!) and I really like this Link you created- tough, defiant yet kind of cute too. And with pretty good morals for a 'street urchin'.

*sits and waits impatiently for update*

With A Heart Beeding Ink

~ C.J. Ellison

Im happy to see youre going to write this story.

I dont care if it is sporadic... My english is terrible and I cant help you with grammar or spelling.

Keep doing a good work because Im still thing youre very talented.

Wait wait wait! You're only 13? No way. You, my friend, are a VERY gifted writer. I've met people win my own University who don't have the ability to write half this good. This is fantastic. Please continue this. I believe you have an excellent start. I would love to know what happened. :-)

Am i the only person that is engrosed in the story right now? Anyway this is a very nice fic... i really hope u update soon cause of all of the awesome sauce of this story.

Great story so far! You have a lot of potential in this story and I hope you work tirades completing it. I'm sure I'd you do it'll be a real masterpiece. You do a great job of making us want more and more, so I really look forward to seeing what happens next. You're quite a good writer already, and you can only get better. Keep up the good work :D !

i love the story do update soon

What a great story! You have great potential as a writer. And you are only 14? Dude, creativity-wise, you are way ahead of some of the people I read fanfic. Keep on writing.

I would love to give a full review but alas the link to chapter three seems to be broken.

AND THEN HE GETS TAKEN TO THE CASTLE AND MEETS ZELDA :DDDDDD

*Runs ar0und room* UPDAAAAAATE!

hi! I really like your story. You're off to a strong start and I can't wait to read more! I'm looking foward to the next chapter and can't wait to find out what will happen to Link now. I love your plotline and am waiting impatiently for another chapter D (but don't feel pressured! I'm impatient by nature but very lazy, take your time!) I can't wait for more of the plot to be introduced and would be really sad if you don't continue the story!

Keep writing!

~bookworm~