I dont know why but I never suspected the man in the beginning was James. From the second you introduced Alec into the story I assumed it was him. Maybe I'm just overthinking here but authors usually don't just randomly mention characters the way you did Alec for absolutely zero reason. So hes my #1 guess. I also suspect he was the second guy that was there that night with James and he was the guy who came up to Bella in the diner. I cant wait to find out if I'm right or not! lol. Really enjoying this story, I hate it's almost over

Love love loved this fic! One of my favs in a very long time!

The letter has me in tears

Jasper has such horrible timing ugh. But amazing chapter!

You are a fantastic writer. I have read many stories written by you. They are really good. I enjoy reading your stories. Thankyou.

I've been looking for the story again for ages. So glad I was able to read it again!

Amazing story! It was an emotional roller coaster but so worth it. Thank you.

I read this story quite awhile ago and just re-read it. I enjoyed just as much as the first read, if not more. Definitely a favorite. Thank you!

Wow! What a beginning.

amazing story

Just found this story & love it!

I really loved this story. Thank you.

Oh My Freaking God. Oh My God. This is absolutely the BEST, AWESOME, MAGNIFICENT, TERRIFIC, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, INCREDIBLE, SPLENDID (...the list goes on and on but I'll have to stop here due to my lack of intelligence xD but you get the point, right?) I loved it! The first few chapters left me beyond awe-strucked: it completely stole my heart... by the last few chapters, I was speechless. Edward was well... a total sweetheart beneath the menacing exterior and that had me hooked the most. You nailed it. It's like the classic Beauty and the Beast but with a twist that left me at the edge of my seat! Each chapter had its own significant meaning to it and for that- from the bottom of my humble heart... I applaud you :) This is so gonna be one of my favourite fanfics evah. Ditched homework for this but so WORTH IT (Imma geek, I know ) Anywayz love ya (I four-letter you ]) Peace out thanks for such an awesome fanfic

I don't know if has already been pointed out but in this chapter it says Edward like visiting the greenhouse but in an earlier chapter (2 or 3 I think) he says he can't bare to step foot in it. For continuity this needs changing :) x

Thanks for a well written and entertaining story. Very creative.