*fangirl scream* I loved the way this story was it was well written! .

AWWWWWWWWWWWS! too adorable. Poor Blaine. Lucky both of them for getting each other. Beautiful story; I'm expecting great things from you!

Nice chapter. I'm really enjoying this, I think if you split up the paragraphs more it would be even more enjoyable. Also, private boarding schools (not affiliated with the catholic church) usually cost at least 25,000 - 30,000 dollars per year. But whatever. Great job!

AWWWW! Blaine liked it so he put a ring on it ;D lmao. I loved that! This was so cute!

AWWWWWWWWWWW

I really liked this story ) Very good.

Oh poor Kurt. It reallly really sucks when you can't even take your own shirt off. Ugh. Poor kid, but he's got Blaine to help so...is he really suffering :D

can't wait to see where they are in a year. this story has been great! :)

awesome story! it is good to know that his voice has not be affected by the surgery

Love this story, can't believe its nearly the end!

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You have a fantastic idea going on, but you're making some MAJOR grammatical errors.

Everytime something new happens, or a new person speaks, that's a new paragraph. Like this:

Once inside, Kurt fell to the floor and crawled to the wall. He knew something like this would happen but he didn't think it would be this early in the day. Holding his hand to his stomach, he prepared for the next blow but nothing came. There was silence and, for a moment, he thought that Dave had gone but his thoughts were broken when the door opened and in came Dave followed by Azimio.

He let out a sigh, "Please just leave me alone" he begged.

The two Neanderthals laughed and advanced towards him, Azimio grabbing him by the collar and lifting him to his feet. The large men took turns in beating him, leaving cuts and bruises all over his body and face. The final blow came from Dave who brought his fist straight into Kurt's face and heard the crack. As soon as they let him go, he fell to the floor, breathing heavily although it pained him to do so. He managed to pull himself up on the sink and look in the mirror. Blood was pouring down his face from a cut on his head and from his nose. He had bruises all over his cheeks and hand prints on his throat where Azimio had tried strangle him.

He looked around for his bag and saw it dangling from a cubicle handle. Walking to it slowly and getting it, he headed out and towards his car. He knew he couldn't drive, his whole body ached. He took out his phone and composed a message:

Something like that, I would suggest you get a beta if it's too confusing for you. I'm going to keep reading your story though, it looks REALLY interesting.

Emma

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Oh, poor little sexy hobbit!

Awww, that was so sweet I just got a cavity :P Very nice!

Aww, so sweet :) Poor Kurt, it's hard to leave family. Going away to university was hell on me, (such a momma's girl :P), so I totally get that.