Of course I knew what the climax of the story would be. But the drama, the suspenseful build, giving the point of view from 3 different people was brilliant. Well done, I really enjoyed that little gem.

Wow, that was hot, although I did figure it out way be4 the end. Cute (potential for being smexy) one shot. Sometimes less is more

Nice writing

Aww so cute! Love that Peter took the initiative. Very believable, too, not too much smoop

great implusive kiss in the heat of the moment.

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awwwwwwwwwww soooooooooooo sweet love it is gonna be there another chapter?

Loved it! I like to write a slash story myself ;)

lol that was a great ending. _ Ja.

all angsty and then the pleasant sweetness, though i must say tha ti would have liked a smidge more romance

Is this going to be a two shot?

I love it :) ... I was sure it was going to be Neal who grabbed Peter just to shut him up.. but this was SOOOOOOOOO much better!