i was enjoying this story un till you wrote uhura into it i don't like her i was only whan't to find a story that told me how old spock's dad was when he met his mother

the song blaclbird by the beatles was good i like the music of the fab four will you put other beatles songs in this story it would be good

was spock born on vulcan or earth has spock told uhura many years later that vulcan has no moons

The story so far is very interesting and emotional. I love the way you depict the character's feelings differently based on the different viewpoints. My favourite one is of Sarek. I have read some information said that Spock has some problems with his father, and Sarek somewhat does not regard his son's heritage. Reading that part makes me very happy as you have shown a different aspect, that Vulcans feel, too. Amanda's part is also very good, as all maternal love could be like that. Uhura's part is quite short and fast. I hope you could slow the pace down. I am looking forward to the new part. Keep up the good work :)

Aww, sad end for Nyota. In this reality anyway. O ho! I always get heartwrenching pson when anyota loses Spock TT_TT Brilliantly written!

I am really interested in your writing, it is very good. Ilike the way you weave a story. I have been reading fanfic for a few months now, I am truly a reader, no other talent. I see a story weaver in this work. I will continue to look for your update. Thank you.

Hey

Love this cant wait to see who is next

Another nice one. And I like that old beatles' song, too. Thanks for writing this. Can't wait to see who is next... Pike perhaps?

Yeah... warm fuzzies for everyone. I like this, your take on Sarek shows his more private side. Nice. I look forward to sneaking a peek at the other important people in Spock's life.