| Reviews for The Trial of Dolores Jane Umbridge |
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Guest chapter 2 . 6/20 Do they always try that Nuremburg defense thing? |
VashonBeader chapter 5 . 6/11 Very nice! Thank you for writing and sharing! |
thepuzzlingcentaur chapter 5 . 1/3 First of all, thank you for writing. Second of all, I love your court system (or whatever the proper term is). Third...ending is very ,very disappointing. I've watched too much 18 movies and there is a lack of brutal, prolonged and excruciating deaths. :) Thank you. |
kimjo2 chapter 5 . 12/18/2019 Great Great great! Thanks so much. JKR didn't do anything to her. One of her many errors. Thanks for rectifying. |
z chapter 1 . 12/7/2019 that bitch |
spinnerofdark chapter 5 . 11/16/2019 : ) |
neuromantic chapter 5 . 10/1/2019 Awesome :D |
Th3Pr0fessor chapter 5 . 8/21/2019 I commend your mastery of the all the judicial systems and terms you incorporated throughout the story. I can so picture Hermione played by Emma in this fic. was I appreciate how you redeemed Marietta, and your spin of Umbitch's motives is hilariously petty. However, I would have created a canon niece for her by her brother - a muggle-born witch by the suname of Cracknell, since her dad would surely change his name to his mother's maiden name. It would have taken a different tone and emotional impact and twist to have Young Ms. Cracknell testifies of the mistreatment her father and grandmother suffered under the Umbridge because of their blood status, and at the same time reveal , again, to everyone, that Umbitch was a half-witch that came out of the womb of a muggle with a squib for a brother, and practically a muggleborn of a niece. May I have the permission to write this alternate ending ? or could you ? |
Fugacity chapter 5 . 6/3/2019 Hmmm - the bracer glowed most brightly - confirming how absolutely she believed it when Hermione uttered her final statement ... So very funny. I always hated Umbridge the most. |
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 6 . 12/20/2018 Loved it |
Pottergirlfreva chapter 5 . 12/1/2018 Nicely done . The unanimously hated charater in HP universe gets exactly what she deserves. I wonder what her actual backstory was though. |
dude356 chapter 5 . 8/17/2018 Very enjoyable story from start to finish. I liked the addition of Marietta's perspective on things and her ultimate redemption for her actions against the DA. Hermione's involvement in this makes perfect sense. She's the one who came up with the idea of the DA, a group designed to teach actual defense in defiance of Umbridge, she's the de facto leader of the group of witches and wizards that Umbridge takes specific aim at after she's driven out of Hogwarts (muggle-borns) and she's ultimately the one who drove Umbridge out of the castle for good. Who better to be the one to bring Umbridge down at her trial than Hermione? My favorite part of Hermione's involvement was her decision to call Ollivander as a witness to completely refute Umbridge's ridiculous claims that muggle-borns steal their wands and magic from purebloods (it says proper wizards and witches, which I can only assume to mean purebloods). That was genius and definitely something that Hermione would think to do. |
LJ Summers chapter 5 . 8/12/2018 First, I love Little Fuzzy. :) And go, Hermione! She was great. Thank you for the story. |
LJ Summers chapter 4 . 8/12/2018 Hermione is verifiably giddy, here. A rare thing to see. One can sit in wonder and fear if she ever decides to actually pursue a legal career. |
LJ Summers chapter 3 . 8/12/2018 So at this point I am DYING to know what is in store! |