Thank you for sharing!

This is a good story. Are you going to continue it? I would love it if you did. You are a talented writer.

Gah! MORE! Don't leave me hanging like this! MORE, I SAY! I'm loving this so far but, dammit, you had to leave it on a cliffhanger. Lol :D In all seriousness, I think this is really sweet and, actually, I can see something like this happening.

I've thought that ever since I watched the movie and, for some reason, during the dojo fight scene with Miyagi, when Mike is thrown against the wall, I always imagined Daniel coming out with a "Hey, man. You alright?" and helping him up. Not sure why. I always saw it in my head and this is a sort of extension of that which I'm really liking. Great story. :)

I'm very sorry about your loss...Im sure that 2012 will be just what you'll need and more! I'm gladd you're back and I hope to see more of your work. Your talent for writting really does shows through all your stories.

-I send you much love and a Happy New Years! ;)

My goodness, I can see why it took you so long to update! An amazing chapter that was even lengthier than the one before! And I'm sorry about you loss of family members.

Ooooh, how I love Mike. So sexy and strong and bad! His swearing and violent outbursts are all perfect! His anger and resentment towards his past is brilliantly written.

Daniel's wet dream is soooooo...amazing (but you're a tease!) and just delicious! Maybe if Mike is sent to wake him up in a future scene, Daniel can be moaning or begging in his sleep; I would love to see Mike's reaction to that!

Mr. Miyagi is perfect too; his teaching of meditation and the proper breathing are great. And him pairing Daniel and Mike up as teacher and student respectively was perfect!

Of course, I love the scene of Mike taking care of Daniel and Daniel admiring Mike's looks! And Mike having Daniel lean agaisnt him and finally being able to touching him! Eeek! I almost died of happiness! It was actually a truly-well written scene (and not just because it was an almost sexual scene) with both in character, even Mike with his gentleness. I' love to see more scenes like that between them!

It almosts seems as though your writing has changed in this chapter. It feels like I'm not really reading the story anymore, but like I'm listening to someone tell it. (Which isn't a bad/good thing, just an observation.) Almost like you've lost the 'poetic' element to your writing and replaced it with a more realistic feel (which isn't a good or bad thing, just an observation. Though I tend to like the 'poetic' element more than anything.)

No matter how your writing has changed, I still love it. And your plot for the story is amazing.

Just don't take so long to update anymore and I will remain sane, I promise.

Hey...so it's STM again...WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE? :( Explain to me what's wrong!

Hello! Just gotta say that I absolutely love this story! I wish you would update it because Id really like to know what happens next. But if you don't, then oh well I guess. I never read a Mike/Daniel fic before and I'm really enjoying it. Please update if your still writing it, because your writing is very good!

:D

So it's Sick Twisted Mind again wondering...WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!

I like your story. Its cute and well written. I like how Daniel and Mike interact. I'm looking forward for more.

~Gina Rae

YOU HAVE TO HURRY AND POST NEXT CHAPTERS! PLEASE IM CRYING RIGHT NOW CAUSE I CANT KEEP READING! I WANT, NO, I NEED MORE! U R AWESOME!

Whew! Sorry it took me so long to review, but hey, it took you a long time to update!

Okay, I don't have much time, so I loved it all, don't change ANYTHING, just update faster!

I LOVED the last line

"Hai my sons are pain in ass"

Funniest line in the whole chapter :D

Please update soon!

Alright, I won't mess up this review by submitting it before I'm done!

So first off, YOU ARE A TEASE! Mike and Daniel are rolling around on the floor and Mike pins Daniel to the wall and all they do is fight! WTF? I wanted some action! Accidental butt grabbing, hard things below the belt, something!

But I did like how Mike noticed how small Daniel was compared to him ;)

And Miyagi was very in character "Maybe you two go to marriage counsellor..." LOL!

And I liked "Do you know why little punks like you are minorities?" Haha! Daniel's answer didn't really seem like something he would say, but I still got a kick out of it.

And how Mike had to save the day by taking control of the wheel when Daniel and he almost got hit, how cute!

AND YOU ADDED JOHNNY! I LOVE HIM! Maybe, just for me, when Mike and Daniel get to FINALLY go to bed, maybe, just maybe, Johnny could join them once? Please!

And Daniel saved Mikey from getting hit by a car! Aww! And Mike thinks Daniel is innocent!

And poor Johnny! He feels so bad for beating Daniel up and how his parents don't care for him! Yet I also find it odd that Johnny would share such a personal secret thing with Mike...

And Johnny and Daniel bickering was so cute! "My head feels huge." "Isn't that normal for you LaRusso?" "Johnny, you're here too, man? Bit(e) me."

I do think it was a bit odd for Daniel to say he liked Mike, even if he meant as a friend. I don't think he would loosen up to him so quickly. But that doesn't mean it wasn't sweet ;)

I loved the last ine, even thugh I don't think Miyagi ever cusses.

, quite a long review! But this was quite a long chapter. I don't think this even counts as a review, I pretty much just went through and re-told the whole chapter, just much shorter, lol. But I loved it and you shouldn't take such a long time to update the next chapter!

Holy Sh!t! Long chapter! Thank God my school had a two hour delay so I could read this!

Well damn, alot happened, didn't it?