Nice.

Lovely
Thanks for sharing

I loved it! but you did make one small mistake. You mentioned that Lestrade wondered how the holmes' were so attractive and intelligent but he didn't realize Mycroft's last name til later on. Other smalls one like grammar and spelling, but overall really amazing!

It is a little difficult for me to competely understand the stroy..but I do like it.
(That's..amazing:D)
I was wondering if you'll allow me to translate it in Chinese.
Perhaps someone has asked you before but..I'd still like to have a try
I'm not sure whether you 'll see my words (It's a story that was written in 2010 after all.)But if I'm lucky enough,please reply me soon.
(I'm so sorry for my probably mistakes in written English.)

Amazing!

It's a really good story.

All sweet...

And if you made mistakes it wasn't a big problem,

cause I'm French and I understood it pretty well.

I hope you will continue with this pairing cause you did a really good job.

Bonne journée! et encore bravo

Oh God. Greeeeaaaaaat!

Hi!

This story is really amazing :D

I read it twice xD (going for a third time soon xD )

And I was wondering, if you would allow me to translate the story into german :D

Mystrade is so a beautiful pairing but there arent many fics in german about them yet :(

And i really like the part, where Mycroft's crying ... i mean, its a little sad, yes, but he really screwed up, soooo...xD

BB, hope i will hear from you soon

(sorry, my english isnt that good...)

I don't care that Mystrade isn't plausible yet (but who knows, Sherlock has been working with the police long enough for Mycroft to kidnap Lestrade ;)), but they're my new obsession *_*

So thank you for feeding my ever growing appetite for MOAR Mystrade! *lol* I'm going to check now if ytou wrote that x'mas fic...

Oh, and your Mommy Holmes is delightful!

Fantastic! Thank you so much for taking time off of studying to write this. You made my week with this.

Oh this was so very very wonderful. I want to hug the person who told me about this. I love Lestrade, I love Mycroft, I love Sherlock, and everybody else, even Anderson! h/c is my biggest kink, and you did it perfectly. oh the comfort felt so good. thank you for writing this story, and i really hope you are writing the christmas sequal.

hugs and kisses

(i've been having migraines for three days sorry if i'm not being terribly coherent )

Thanks for writing it (and gosh, good luck to your exams!) The way they fall for each other is simply beautiful. Though being hurt and backed off in the process, they still find each other at last. It's so adorable : )

Seriously I do enjoy reading it so much, and if I could have your permission, I'd love to translate it into Chinese and share on a slash fan forum - of course with proper acknowledgements and a link to the original work. It would be great if you could allow me, even if it doesnt sound good to you, please do write for the pair! It wont be your last fic for them, right? *wink*

YAY! MYSTRADE! This was extremely well written and I didn't notice too much wrong. I'm American, so I really couldn't tell if it was British or not. Oh well.

Mmhmm...Mystrade. I like that. It finally has a name. YESH! XDD

You did indeed make a number of mistakes - mostly spelling and punctuation. I'd suggest editing it by looking much more closely at homonyms and possessive apostrophes. Other than that, BRILLIANT. :D

Seemed British enough to me, but I'm Australian too (not qualified to be a brit-picker, unfortunately) XDDD

My first Mystrade(?) fic ever. I enjoyed reading it very much. They do make a lovely couple. :) Oh, and thanks for the SH/JW!