Reviews for The Black Cloud
AngelofDarkness95 chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
Wonderful please post more :)
PureAngelEyes chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
hi, i think that ya have a awsome story here n i hope that ya decide to continue with it. n if so plzr add more real soon _
Muffy the Dough Slayer chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Even though I haven't seen the series or anything and I don't really understand it, I think it's pretty good so far ;) You've caught my attention, the main character's voice seems intriguing and I can relate to them. Except, at the beginning, it says she and then it says I? Did I read it wrong or...? Anyway, so far, so good, and I really think you should continue! You've already got the beginning written, and to me, that is the hardest part.