Wow. I really liked this. Despite it being short. Like I saw the first reviewer write, I've always been kind of afraid that my life would come and go insignificantly and that would be that. Yeah. This just made me even more scared of that. Good for you for eliciting that kind of feeling, though, sincerely.

I thought this characterization was done beautifully well. And I liked the "blink" theme, and how fast it moved. I don't know how to explain it, but I guess I really enjoyed this style of writing.

Keep up the good work!

Short but sweet. Just like life, I suppose. Anyway, this is a great little fic. I'm a fan of longer fics, but I think this one is perfect just the way it is - reaffirming that if you blink you're going to miss out.

Wonderful philosophy, even if it is a little morbid.

...whew.

I had to read it twice. It's like... blink blink. And you've read the story and have no idea what's happening.

So sad... *tears up* It's awesome, thought.

I dunno, I have a sort of fear of just watching my life go by without really doing anything, and this just played on that. And... yeah...

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*hugs*