That was cool. Nice job telling Jorge's story, he's my favorite of noble team :)

I liked this very much; you make him seem different from the other kids but not out of control due to his size (no more than any kid is, anyway.) I really liked how you worked the Hungarian language in, and Halsey-well, it's sad that she has to do this with so many kids. I wonder how many quarters she's offered by this time. She was very reminiscent here of how she was portrayed in the Reach novel. I like that she notices that he's "innocent". With the way he knocked her down (a funny scene), you've captured the game's sortof contradictory personality for him, the soft-hearted killer. Of course the Spartans-as-knights metaphor was very cool and I think could have been played up even more. Good job!

I really liked this. From the beginning, you establish a side of Jorge only seen twice in the games - one that doesn't protect the weaker because of his mass and skill, but one that protects the weaker because it is right. I really liked how he had fun playing dragons and knights. All in all, I think this is a great piece because it shows us Jorge in a way we never got to see in the game. Really, nicely written. This was spectacular.

(Also, I'm totally inspired for this! Can I draw a few panels for this story?)