My only complaint is that you are not nearly perverted enough to be a magic user in RosarioVampire. In fact your lack of commitment on the perversion is just unsettling.

Dude, I love this story! Personally, I love Self-Inserts. Lets the reader know how innovative and imaginative the author can get in his/her work. And on top of that, great direction in all ways! This story is SICK, my dude!

As much as I dislike self-insert fics, I'm probably going to follow this. I like the writing, it's better than others. Besides I like Mizore, she's by far the cutest of the bunch.

Ahaha rly cute. Very adorable chapter, well at least in the last part.

Aw...well, if that's the way it has to be...:(

grrrr! your evil! lol just kidding nice one tho..BUT HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT ONE!

first of all, the title has become misleading due to where the story is heading, but all and all, really good stuff.

Nice job. Thanks to you my new favorite girl is Mizore rather than Kurumu. Nice to see that you didnt go into the whole sex-fest early on. Keep up the good work!

vary good

what are the pairing

An excellent chapter! the best by far. Great work! XD

I am liking where this story is going. You're not making it into one big sex fest like most people, including myself, usually do, which is good. I like your grammar, and this is just an amazing story, and well thought out too.

O_O

this was extremely well done. You're good, my friend. XD

Getting better. Excellent work.

good intro

:/ I originally read this to write a self insert parody, but you ruined it. This needs to be said: its probably one of the best self inserts ive read. i hate SIs and read them for laughs. surprisingly, you seem to have discovered plot development. hm. you arent actually a bad writer, but the only people that like self inserts are the writers. anyway, good luck, and ill laugh my *ss off if i find out youre a troll.