Reviews for Crumbling
XxSil chapter 2 . 10/9/2017
Dude you gotta continue, this is so good!
AmethystFlare3 chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
I know you haven't updated this particular story in forever..BUT I think you should! I really like this, I want to know why Danny disappeared! I mean I have my theories but not sure..and I didn't even realize Valerie was the girl until you told us! I forgot she had green eyes! Haha :) Love this so far!
Vitaliciouscreations chapter 2 . 9/2/2013
Terrific!
Desiree Phantom chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
I say this needs more chapters. _
ashes34 chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
hmm... interesting start:)
nycorrall chapter 3 . 6/13/2012
This is actually pretty impressive. So far so good. Update soon?
kirara the great chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
im sorry for reveiwing so much but i deffinitly need more of this story
Vi-Violence chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
This looks good.
The Half-Blood Guardian chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
:O *Blinks* Wow! An update! YAY! 8D

This story is amazing, and I'm SOOO glad that you decided to keep working on it. You're doing a great job :)

-Birdie out
LuNa chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
It's really good but I just hope you will updated soon ...more like sooner than before but still... also, OMG! danny can't be doing that !
DizzlyPuzzled chapter 2 . 5/15/2012
This is a really good story and i'm glad you decided to continue otherwise i would have never found it! it's really good and i hope you continue it soon! i would give ideas but i don't want to hurt what ideas you might have now..its a little early in the story for that to happen..XD
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Me: You know, sometimes Danny is such an idiot!

Danny: Hey! Am not! I would totally put my secret at risk to help people get out!

Me: First of all, I can't believe you said totally. Second of all, why didn't you just go intangible through the floor when no one was paying attention to you, then come back as Phantom to save everbody?

Danny: Um... I don't really know... That's a pretty good idea...

Me: Idiot :P

Danny: :(
ChopSuzi chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
Wow, so Danny was being an ss and just up and left them? Of course, I don't blame him. He's gotta keep the rest of his secret intact.
c3llar door chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
Wow, this is awesome. I just hope you don't take another year and a half to update again.
Maid of Rage chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
wow...i had forgotten about this fic, but i'm sure as hell glad it's started up again!

loving how this is going, please update!
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