Reviews for NEW MAN |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WOW |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was an excellent response to that prompt. I love how you weaved in amnesia and Mexico and Franks to make this a believable, incredibly touching and hot story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow it was a good one |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew the real reason he came back from Mexico wasnt cuz Ziva was in trouble but cuz he missed Tony! I've always loved Franks and this story just makes me love him more! Great job with them! Gibbs not being in control is something that not a lot of people want to try writing but I like it and you did it great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow that was sooo good:) well written and just perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. Good imagery of naked Gibbs on the beach and a very hot Tony. I would've liked to have known what a 2nd chapter would bring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked this. Loved how you did it completely from Gibbs' point of view, showing all his confusion and hurt. Also loved how you wrote Mike and Tony. Mike, giving him the space he needed while being there when Gibbs needed to talk. And Tony for showing up when he did and giving Gibbs what he wanted and needed. Wonderful writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story... |