Reviews for Breakable Hummingbirds
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2014
This chapter was very fun...I loved the Ruby parts sooo much
Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
I really liked the second great although I'm still waiting for Dean to come bach somehow and make everything alright.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
No!I love Ruby as a demon...Her being a human is just wrong and he can't die 'cause that's wrong too...However I liked it and now I'll read the next chapter so...
Ya chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
ya3000 chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
This story is so tragic, yet somehow humorous. Please update whn you can.
LucidKren chapter 3 . 9/27/2011
This chapter was utterly fantastic. I loved how you compared Levi to what would be the love child of Seth Cohen and Xander Harris. XD

And intrigue! Where has Dean's soul gone? Maybe...Michael has it? (a very weird guess, but a guess nonetheless)

This is an incredibly awesome story. I hope with every fiber of my being that you continue it. What you have here is special.

~Illu
LucidKren chapter 2 . 9/27/2011
This was a very interesting chapter. Ruby's p.o.v. is very fun to read from due to her personality. So, I'm going to pose a guess here as to Ruby's humanity and Dean's death: Dean sold his soul (again) to allow Ruby to become human. I can't wait to find out how wrong (or right) I am. :)
LucidKren chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
This blew me out of the water. You reached me on an emotional level-I started crying. This was tragic and beautifully crafted, and I'm going to go read the next chapters. I need to find out what happens.

~Illu
Ridea chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
I started reading because I was intrigued about the whole Ben and Ruby relationship. Ruby as a parent is exceedingly interesting and I love the way you portray the characters. Ruby's vunerabilities are very clear while she tries to act strong and Ben is so aware like a kid is. I like that Ruby knows that and doesn't really hold back. I look forward to more, great job!
januarysunshine13 chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
Please,,,,don't torture us anymore! Please tell us what happened to Dean!
Duffster21 chapter 3 . 12/7/2010
he doesn't know... HE DOESN'T KNOW!

how can he not know... isn't he an Angel of the fucking Lord

can someone please explain to me how an Angel can not know where a man's soul went after death

how could they misplace something so fucking important

seriously a soul is the only (inanimate) thing someone leaves behind when they die

unless if they can't find his soul does that mean he is really dead

is he still alive somewhere (oh if he is your going to get a shitload of complaints from me)

but then obviously he is because ruby found his body (which im still kind of upset about by the way) its not a way for a woman/wife to find her man/husband

so in the end i have one big whopping question

WHERE THE FUCKING HELL IS DEAN (OR DEAN'S SOUL) WTF?

im so fucking confused right now

i hope there is a reason for this cuz i don't like being confused

i get anxious and irritated and can't sit still and omg it starting

at th moment i severely dislike you

update ASAP

Duffster
Ghostrider chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
Devious, thy name is Becks.

The emotions are overflowing in this chapter. Not to mention that you seem to have buy cliffhangers in bulk.

So, Dean's soul is neither in Heaven nor Hell. One place they haven't looked is Purgatory.

I have a feeling it has everything to do with Ruby's sudden transformation into human, but I could be wrong. You have a knack to keep us guessing.
Miss Gypsy Willow chapter 3 . 12/5/2010
Well that was a brilliant chapter. I really love Ben in this chapter especially, he's so snarky and defiantly his fathers son. Oh and I loved all the Buffy references xD And now I too am really curious as to where Dean's soul is. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ghostrider chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
An amazingly poignant start to this story. That's all I can say.

The characters are just leaping off the screen and the way the portrayals are written, are beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.

I'm both dreading and looking forward to what is going to be revealed about Dean's death and the further continuation of the Ben and Ruby relationship.
Daddy's LiL HeartBreaker chapter 2 . 11/28/2010
Oh this story. So I love that Dean and Ruby's house is near Bobby's house. Ruby so would go around saying she was Bobby's daughter and I could see her finding that amusing. Oh Ben! Poor kid. "Or they'd be touching without even realizing it and lighting the room on fire." I love that line so much! It just fits Ruby and Dean perfectly.

Aww, I'm glad that Ben has that one picture of him with his parents. Oh my god, they have a picture of John, Mary, and the boys? That is too precious! Oh Dean, if I could, I'd bring you back from the dead just to kick your ass for hurting this kid and Ruby and Sam. Ruby kept the jacket. AWWW. I love the whole thing with Ben and the jacket. Not surprised that Dean wanted to pass it on to him.

So I just love Ben and Ruby's stepson/stepmother relationship. Yep. That is exactly how Ruby and Dean got together. I can see it perfectly. Ahaha yes, only Dean would pop the question like that after nearly dying a second time. Oh my god.. "...Suck on that." "Why don't we save that for the honeymoon?" "Is that a really dirty way of saying yes? Are you saying yes?" "...Yes."

Ahaha sorry for repeating all that, but oh my god. Most epic Dean and Ruby proposal yet. It is so them. Aww I love how she wanted a baby, but didn't want to pass on her demonic genes. I knew it I knew it I knew it! Dean knocked her up! I knew it!

Okay so I love all the stuff about the switch she could flip to turn it all off. Kind of reminds me of the Vampire Diaries and how the vampires have a similar switch. No, his Death was not an accident and I'm going to kick Dean in the damn head. Is it weird that at first I thought she named the baby Benjamin and just now I realized that Ben is short for Benjamin? Ahaha oops. Um, Ruby and Cas are hot. There I said it. LOL.

Aww Ben knows she's preggers. Yay. "I can learn" and with those three little words, you made me love Ben and Ruby's bond even more. So I think I'm going to have to kick Dean in the head for killing himself and throw something at Sam's head for being an ass. Yep that about sums it up. Oh and um, It is Dean and Ruby Winchester. Of course they got the job done pretty darn quick. They are freaking rabbits.
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