Kickass! I love the way you write about the characters that don't get much mention in cannon, it's such a breath of fresh air!

PEACE :P

This is the best Rikudou Sennin fanfic I have ever read.

This is also the best Juubi fanfic I have ever read.

The creature was not arrogant, it's presence alone was a danger, which justified the Sennin's actions.

The Sennim's personality fit perfectly, human yet capable.

You sir, have won the Internets.

I found no grammatical errors.

Can you say 10/10?

so is this the entire fight or just the end? I want to see the entire fight, because if the end is this good, I can imagine the rest of the fight

just 2 words Awesome and Epic. good work