Um... Katie I don't know what site that the end of the URL is for if you could be kind enough to direct me to the site that it's ment for that would be really great. Thank you.

Gods... so dark... I shouldn't like it.. yet I'm drawn here repeatedly to read again. Well done for writing some that makes me uncomfortable yet strangely aroused at the same time. I'm warped... send me to hell in a hand basket...

Harry and James slash... (hey, oh my god its like Harry Potter and his dad's names lol). is wonderful, but you write some mean rape-smut! Awesome. I just love James turmoil and angst... its so pretty.

You are at a publishable level of writing. I love this immensely.

Aw poo us beat me too it! I thought of writing a fic like this,just valtiel was replaced by one of the ph clones but ya beat me too it! Kudos!

Second chap would be awesome

Wow that was great I loved it, write more

that was just... amazing. Love the 3some idea, Your writing skills are just fantastic, and I really did feel so sorry for james :(

Amazing job

That, my dear, was beautiful. It was so perfectly written and told, the charactors development, the features, the disturbing back story, the thoughts, it all flowed perfectly. Marry me?

: 3

Hey you did really really good on this story! I loved it! Hope you do a sequelXDDD

Aw poor James, I'm so glad he ends up with Harry in your other stories. ) I like James' thought process during his whole ordeal, very relatable and realistic. The two web addresses you gave for your friends comic did not show. It starts at .com, just so you know. I was wanting to read it too. ( Anywho, great one shot, and Happy Thanksgiving! :D