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Really well written. I liked it very much. I would llke it if you wrote more. Like another chapter. I hope you didn't forget about it.

I literall y just finished the manga a minute ago! I had to come straight to to make sure it had a fandom, cuz it'd be a crime if it didn't :P. This story has started exceptionally well, my only concern is that a few of the sentences didn't flow quite as they should, and i mean like, one or two, so it's not a big thing, just sound out what you're typing either out loud or in your head to hear if that's how the message you're conveying would actually be spoken that way in casual (or whatever kind intended) conversation or if you need to switch a few words around. Please don't take this as harsh criticism, as it wouldn't be my place, considering i'm beginning to think I was only ever meant for reading fiction, not writing it :(. Please remember to update!

Hi Tsukiyomi-san. Your story had a nice first installment there, I just want to point out this one:

-Morino had a flash of when she had been almost killed by her classmate. Remembering how the knife to her bare chest had a cold glint and seemed to be alive.-

If this implied the incident in the last chapter, it wasn't Morino's classmate who tried to kill her, it was a boy from another class, so shouldn't it be "schoolmate" instead?

That's it, I hope to see more of your story. Good luck.

yup i also got excited reading that manga. i also read the novel version (it was in japanese though...) nevertheless i wanted more of that manga and i am waiting for more of your story :)