I love the (bad word) parentheses. XD Very clever, and little kids are so cute.

Keep writing!

~Ashe*

Cute story, though if some guy stole my ice-cream I'd be a little mad hahaha :)

Lol, no swearing it's just implied and awwww Duntie moment! I'm thinking of names for Duncan/Katie, Datie, Kaitan, Duncie (pronounced Dunk-ey. This is a good one-shot and I like the pairing. Keep it uup!

Awww, that was so (bad word) cute!

The kiss was just too adorable.

Great Dutie one-shot!

:)

Best Wishes,

fulltimereviewer

Awww! I love seeing the rise of Duncan/Katie fics on here! They actually make a great couple, and this one-shot here was excellent! It was nice to see Duncan and Katie as kids! This was really well written, and I'd love to see more of this pairing from you! (:

Aww, young love :D Ahha, awesome way to bleep out the bad words :D