nice! you should continue this!

u could do the time rileys mom found them making out lol

Again, a masterful piece of work written from Mrs. Stravos' point of view. Great job!

This was really makes me wish the show had developed this plotline a little longer before the Job!

This was so powerful. I was in awe after I had finished reading it. The feelings, and perspective created through the eyes of the mother was so real it felt like I lived in the same house as Riley. I could hardly believe I was reading, since I found myself so absorbed in the writing. This was an amazing piece, and very pleasurable to read. Great work!

Yeah this woman is in major denial for sure. This was so perfectly written that I wish there was more. Of course, it's simplicity is part of what makes it so perfect.

Very wonderful. Wouldn't have had the same impact if it wasn't in 2nd person, I think. Since it's all about convincing and 2nd person is very direct.

Thank you very much for sharing!

Are you Reily's mom? You sure sound like someone who is in that exact position. I love love love the second person point of view. I honestly cannot imagine a more inpactful way to write this. Well done.

this was really good! :D

THAT WAS AMAZING!

Wow, I... I don't even know what to say. I'm speechless.

This was simply amazing. Heartbreaking and truthful and so well-crafted, I can't even explain. I wish I could, but I can't even begin to. Just... Wow. 3

And the second person worked REALLY well for this, I wouldn't want it any other way.

I'm going to be honest, this is probably one of the very best fics I have ever read. It was just SO wellwritten, gosh.

Thank you for writing it, so much. And please, keep writing. :)

holy shizzle! amazing!

SO YOUR GONNA CONTINUE RIGHT? FREAKING OUT ABOUT WHAT AN AMAZING WRITER YOU ARE

VERY ORIGINAL NO ONE HAS REALLY DONE A FIC LIKE THIS THAT I'VE SEEN (oops caplock was still on XD)

LOVE 3 X3

Normally, I absolutely *hate* and *despise* 2nd person and stuff like it, but I did really like this story. It was well written and interesting enough that I could get over the person. Good job! _

That was nice. You in corporated everything that we've seen. I saw the moment in the trailer and Wow! Great job

This. Was. Incredable.

And I don't hate second person, I really liked it with this story.

And I can't wait ethier for the Ziley drama next year. :)

I can't WAIT to find out how his mom reacts when she sees them kissing. And I liked the story. (even if it was in second person *wrinkles nose*) Very insightful.

Alice