If Claire grew up with her mother, she would NOT have her father's surname. Especially if her parents were not married. I doubt John would ever marry again, so it was a very short-lived thing. Claire's surname should be whatever her mother's was.

Change that and come up with a different way for the boys to discover they have a half-sister, would you?

Ok, so I reread chapter 11 to see if I could gain any new insight and maybe the Trickster didn't take something out of her stomach after all. . . but he still did something! You said something to the effect of "harmed what he wanted to" so I'm still going with my guess of a baby fetus, but if not maybe something was hidden in Claire by an angel? or demon?

Anyway, I felt bad for Claire having to leave but I understood. I loved how she just bossed Sam and Dean around, esp. the part about the thong. :)

Now I'm going on to read the next story!

Every little scene with Matt makes me like him a little more. He's just so much like a fairytale teenage boyfriend that you just can't help but like him.

Finally some insight into Dean's attitude! Methinks that he might also be afraid of Claire facing the same fate as his Mom and Jess. But still, I didn't consider that Dean has never actually lived with a girl before. And now that he has to live with a teenage sister? There is bound to be funny moments (Can you imagine Claire having to break the news to Dean that she needs to buy girl stuff?)

And I haven't forgotten about the Trickster taking something out of her stomach or my little theory about it either! Guess I'll just have to wait to see what happens next!

Can I just say that Claire and Matt are a cute pair? And that Castiel giving Claire a hug made me smile.

Wow. Never a dull moment.

So now there's a mysterious voice involved, presumably its the (or a) bad guy. Maybe he's the reason why Sarah took Claire away from John Winchester and all the hunting? I'm thinking he's after Claire because she's pregnant (I think that's why Matt was called daddy). But these are just my guesses.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! (And don't worry about longer breaks between updates, its one of the busiest times of the year!)

I love when the Trickster is involved! He just makes things that much more interesting!

This is a great story. I love how the characters are true to their tv personas because it makes it easy to imagine your story as Supernatural episodes.

Now I'm curious about the dream she had when she was little! :) And I loved the appearance of protective Dean!

Dean is just too funny with his line, "Well call me your brother!" Dean shouted spreading his arms open. "Family hug?" What's great is that I could actually imagine Dean doing this on the show.

Maybe I'm a bit more suspicious than most when I thought Claire just accepted Castiel as an angel too quickly, but then again, it is Castiel. There's probably enough awkward or weird stuff involving him that it's not out of the norm.

Anyway, I liked the chapter and can't wait for the next!

I just found this story and I love it! I can't wait to see where you take it! 'Uncle Cas' is a great concept and Dean learning that he has a little sister is bound to make for many interesting situations.

On a side note, you may not be getting as many reviews as possible because your settings currently do not allow anonymous reviewers to review. I wasn't sure if you were aware of this or not.

I really like your story and i hope you'll continue writing it! its awesome! :):) keep up the great job! :P