Congrats on being such a great writer!

I can't decide if this story is more sad or sweet. *Teary eyes* I love how you describe Ziva's internal struggle with her feelings. Poor Ziva *sob* lovely story, though :)

If your aim was to make me get all teary eyed, it worked. Those last three lines, especially "She won't die," made me shed a tear. Amazing.

Good story. Very poignant especially that line "She won't die"