Ipsita sent me...damn it *snotsob!*

Sad and happy

So sweet...and sad. Lovely writing.

I literally choked up and cried at the end...

Dammit. Now my laptop is wet...

what a powerful story, i had tears coming down my face and couldnt stop them. wow!

This story was so incredibly sad, but I'm so happy that they're still happy, as hard as that must be. Bella is so strong in this story and that's so great considering what has happened to her. So sad, but I still loved it!

OMG what a sad story, loving but sad.

How heartbreaking. Beautifully written.

This shit just broke me... such a good story, but so sad. :( The structure was beautiful though. Just lovely.

Holy shit! That makes me want to cry! I love it! Could you make this into a longer story? Please?

Well done and good luck. I told myself I wouldn't cry over this, I failed. I had an acquaintance named Kim. Twenty years ago our husbands played softball together. Her husband, named Edward (Eddie) of all things, raced snowmobiles. He was seriously injured in an accident while racing and was in a coma for 8 months before he died. He was 27. He left behind Kim, and their children, a 1 year old, a 2 year old and 4 year old twins. This story made me think of her. Stories like this are written in real lives everyday, and it can happen to anyone. So sad.

Thanks for writing,

Micki

aww thats heartbreaking, stories like this scare me because it can happen to anyone, great job

Heartbreaking, but very well written.

I'm sorry to say that was a depressing ending :( I loved everything but the ending.

Oh damn! This is so hauntingly beautiful...sad (I'm balling). But you know ... This is real love.