Reviews for Veiled Moon
marsolino chapter 1 . 4/16
I heard good things about this story but the format is so bad I can’t bring myself to read it tbh
Forest1395101 chapter 10 . 11/22/2019
Can't believe I read this again! Still great, now I'm sad it died... again...
keller.blair1 chapter 1 . 9/26/2019
Wtf is this stupid format
Warrior Moon Okiro Zangetsu chapter 10 . 8/7/2019
So the chapter is a bit late, no big deal. The important matter here is that the chapter arrived.
HiddenMaster chapter 10 . 4/14/2019
Welp, I gotta admit, I enjoyed reading this. I last read it years ago, and it's just about as good as I remember, if not a little more. I really do like how you've worked in the emotional and internal conflict all these characters are having, especially the dynamic between Uzume and Ichigo.

Shame that the story more or less ends here, but it's seemingly on a positive note. I'd love to know more about how Uzume, Ichigo, Ikki, and Yashima get along with through trials and tribulations of the Sekirei plan, but it's ending on a rather hopeful note here, even if there's room for confusion and mayhem down the line.

So, just as an old fan, I'm saying this is still damn good.
Saint Damz chapter 9 . 3/19/2019
love your fic...hope you update soon
thetyrant67 chapter 6 . 12/3/2018
Wow, Tatsuki's a bitch. A very mean, annoying bitch.

But thank goodness ol' strawberry head had a nice private moment with Uzume.
rahad chapter 6 . 11/14/2018
sigh drop it at chap 6... you made ichigo so gay...uume has half naked and he turned her down? wtf... a 17years would not have said no...
Shadow Master chapter 10 . 8/26/2018
Hey!

Well read through the entire story and I've got to say that I love what you've done so far. It's interesting, it makes significant deviations from canon that work and it has be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Only two things would make this the best Bleach/Sekirei crossover EVER:

1)Ichigo somehow managing to wing Karasuba into his harem. I'm a big fan of the 'In Flight' Sekirei crossover and to see it happen again here would ready make my day.

2)That somehow the winging of the sekirei if not fully restores his shinigami powers then at least puts him at a level where any Ashikabi or Sekirei planning on attacking Ichigo directly will be in for QUITE a surprise.

Still at the end of the day it's your story to do with as you will. Nevertheless I hope a new chapter will be posted soon.

Keep up the good work! C YA!
DredgenVayn chapter 10 . 6/13/2018
I was hoping for more. This fic has a lot of potential for growth.
Ferno16 chapter 10 . 2/16/2018
Its really saddening that this story hit a roadblock and stop. But I don't blame you many authors suffer the same thing.
Ferno16 chapter 6 . 2/15/2018
... never change Isshin never change. Thumbs up!
funkmasterjo chapter 10 . 11/15/2017
nice
CapriSunnyD chapter 6 . 10/14/2017
This was far more enjoyable before you brought his friends and family fully into this. I went from not hating them to hating them in less than half the chapter.
Bunny153539 chapter 7 . 10/4/2017
Can't believe I am re-reading this!
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