isnt this story on DeviantART ?

I, for one, never thought that I'd find myself cheering for vomit! So, YAY for the rainbowy kind, at least!

This was so cute and sweet and sentimental. I liked the feel of intimacy in the story. I don't mean the boys being physically together (though, that was hot!), but the whole feel of the story: just them, in a little room, quietly reaching out to each other. The story itself was a great little flash of insight into the Kogan Universe! This is why you are one of my favorite Kogan writers. :D

Good job! Great offering.

awwwwww soooo cute and sweet!

This was AMAZING! It just made me feel so... giddy? idk really know but it felt PERFECT the entire time :) fantastic job :D

That was freaking ADORABLE! if this was word vomit then you should do it more, because I loved it! Absolutely wonderful!

You're great! D keep it up!

... D'AAWW! That last line.. so great TvT Can you just write a book? Or a million so I could forever just read what you write? Srsly, you are amazing, and I am never not in awe!

i"I can hear it." He began, whispering softly, running a thumb over the moist lips, unable to keep his hands to himself.

Logan nodded slightly, running his fingertips down the others neck. "What do you hear?"

"Everything."/i

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