awwww i love them so much

Oh my god

Oh my god

I'm speechless.. I really love the ending and love the way Mycroft handle his little brother in his own way

Awesome :D I feel as if I really had a peek on the Holmes brothers' childhood.
Although I think the more accurate ending based on BBC Sherlock would have been Mycroft taking so long to forgive Sherlock that the latter grows resentful of Mycroft. And thus the bitter relationship we see today.

Sweet. There's no other word for this. And believably sweet.

That was amazing and so cute!

That was brilliant, so cute!

I find this absolutely adorable. Sherlock is so cute and mycroft is a sweet older brother (sort of)

So cute! I love how much Mycroft cares about Sherlock, and how much Sherlock depends on Mycroft. Especially hat glass scene.

The FEELS. Loved this. Truly, beautiful:)

They are so freakin cute. Good story, here. I thought you captured their characters well, as they would have been before Sherlock became old enough to create absolute chaos. The sequence of events were a little confusing... was everything happening sequentially or was it Mycroft thinking back while Sherlock slept? A little more transition would have made it flow much more nicely. Otherwise, I enjoyed it.

Okay, that was just cute. I think I might draw something of the two of them, like this. Just so that I can have a reference of what they would look like as very young children.

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So cute.

I liked all of the little scenes. I thought you did a great job portraying them as children. And let's face it, they wouldn't have been 'normal' children anyway.

That was so, so precious and sweet. This has got to be one of my favorites.

D'aww, this was so sweet. I love brotherly interaction between Mycroft and Sherlock, brilliant job with this.

I don't know which bit of this I liked, other than the entire Work of course! But I think it was when Sherlock wanted to know if the dog would go all slimy (yes, Sherlock it will) AND when the brothers promised each other that if Narnia existed, they would take each other along.

I, too, took a pillow, blanket, small lamp, tiny radio and all of my books into my closet, hooked everything up, shut the door and prayed with all my might that there was a wardrobe type of wall at the back of the closet...sigh...lovely,,,so lovely a story!