Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

I wish it was a little bit more Advanceshippy, more shipping. And also, for the prayer, if you had done Arceus instead of Lord? I mean, that technically is the God of the pokemon world, and I also think some people would appreciate that.
Otherwise, it's well written and quite cute. So good job!

Now this was one awesome story! Favorited!

I wish for a story about The Chosen One, his Aura powers, additional elemental powers, and save the world cause after seeing this chapter I've got goosebumps.

nicely done. hope you write more stories.

Well, well, soldier...

Whoa.

Just...whoa!

A very revealing start. It all makese sense now! :O Poor May. D:

And then...O_o DAMN! Jessie goin' berserk? LOL Shoulda seen that one comin', after all these episodes of PHAIL on Team Rocket, SOMEONE was BOUND to snap! XD She totally got what was comin' to'er!

And then, all O from there on.

Mission complete! Nice work, marine!

Now, return to base for debrief. The turkey and drinks are on me.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Awesome ending!

And I love the fight between Ash and Jesse!

Sweet!

That was great! :)

So are you going to get back into doing Bending Legends and Comedic Soldiers?

Ilove this chapter and I am going to make my paragraphs like your thanks it is awsome Ilove it

Awesome chapter!

Wonder what will happen next! Will they die or live!

Well hope you update soon!

Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting!

And so, May tried to deal with extreme situations the Ash way.

(Facepalm)

Poor May. D:

And to add insult to injury, those MORONS show up again! (Hard facepalm) Oh how will they get outta this one, now? A

Nice work!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

I wonder who is going to come to the rescue?

Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting.

LOL at all your 4º Wall breaking lines. LOL

And (Whistles) it looks like this party is gonna be crazy! O

And I just HAD to go...DAYUM! at Misy. DAYUM!

And LMAO at Piplup. LMAO Sucka'!

And then! What the Hell is May sorry for...? Hmmmm...very interesting.

I get a feelin' this is gonna be good! :3

Mission start!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

This story is getting to be good.

When Ash says "Whoops...sorry, Brock," is it in italics? I can't tell when I read it on my Nintendo DSi. Sorry!

But I hope that you keep up the hard work! :)

I think May is sorry for having to leave Ash to go on her own and she really missed Ash.