Wow...Now that was cool. I like it. I kinda felt like there was something missing at the end of the episode...it was good but Sam always gets to go home to his Michelle and their kids...what about poor Callen...left to pick deal alone and Kensi too... Well done.

Great story. Made me smile :)

So I've come back to these after you mentioned them and realised I hadn't reviewed/read them - guess not being into Callen/Kensi they slipped past. Sorry about that.

So now to fix that slip -

I think this was really sweet and mostly in character. Callen coming to look to see if they missed anything. Kensi being the more emotional of the team - not because she's the girl but, I think anyway, because she's the one who hasn't seen as much as the others, who hasn't had to deal with so many losses. Unlike Callen, Sam and Hetty.

The main thing I didn't think was in character was Kensi calling him G. Not in the G Callen comment but the rest. Sam seems to be the only one who calls him that.

Other than that I think this was a pretty great job, especially for your first LA fic.

On to the next one...

"though I'd like to own Chris O'Donnell!" - I won't mind owning him, but I think I would like owning Sam and Hetty just a little bit more.

I like it. I think that some of these little missing moments stories are my favorites.

Aw! They're SO cute! You got their characters down, and I'm pretty sure there's not grammar mistakes, so, great job! :D I love this, I think it's something that you could see happening on the actual show, y'know?

I liked it

DEF LIKE IT. IT SHOULD REALLY BECAOME LONGER THAN A ONE SHOT THOUGH! IT HAS GREAT POTENTIAL TO BE A GOOD STORY

Brilliant! I loved how you took that ending of that eppy and made it sweeter by extending it. I just hope you change it from a oneshot to a multi chapter fic.

Omg that is so goood I love it