Thus was really lovely. I love how August is as much a statistical outlier as the rest of the Fringe team are in their own ways and this piece feels like a natural extension of his journey. Well done.

I knew it was Inara! Nice job. This was mysterious, interesting, in-character, and well-written. I like how August was beginning to feel as he entered the afterlife.

Absolutely better than fanfiction. You've got some quality stuff here.