Reviews for Eclipse
guest chapter 1 . 6/28
great story. has much potential where it would go from there.
Toffeecat15 chapter 1 . 2/18
although it hasn't been updated in years, it still works nicely as a oneshot
Wika0304 chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
please update, it's brilliant
Natsuki D chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
So I'm guessing this is a one shot unless there's a sequel. Loved it!
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
Danzo is a evil sob
Jet Set Radio Yoyo chapter 1 . 2/19/2019
I actually love this idea of Team 7 becoming missing-nins and going on the run to make sure that Danzo doesn't get his hands on Naruto. I also like that the whole team leaves in the end because for the most part they want to stay together.

They are like an oddball family on a really deadly road trip.

I like that Sakura, Kakashi, and Naruto leave their hitai-ates behind with the people that they care about. Sort of a nice way to make sure that they don't get thrown away, and that they can be used to give a final farewell in a sense to the people that they are leaving behind.

I would love to see this continued. I would love to see what their adventures around the world would be like, and I would like to see them be able to come back home one day.

However, with that said this works just fine as a oneshot. I loved this a whole lot.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2018
A family camping movie montage starring team 7 just played in my head.
Interesting fic love the concept and how it survives perfectly as a stand alone or can be expanded if you so chose to.
Sincerely
Random ghost reader #6
Laialy chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
Amazing plot and extraordinarily written. You write so Fkin good, like 10/10. Please update this soon, so I wouldn’t just keep reading the same chapter multiple times and cry...a lot
skatingandcruzing chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
:0 wait really? I did not know that the scratching part was an Akatsuki only thing.

the story itself is interesting. can't wait to see how everything else pans out/differs/remains the same from canon; considering Jiraiya and Tsunade are also still out there...somewhere...
notsofrilly chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
Pity this wasn't continued. I would have like to read more.
afallenheart chapter 1 . 12/22/2017
Oh man, this sounds amazing! Please update!
ReadingReadererReader chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
Very cool idea.
PrincessBloodBlossom chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
Please make this in to a series this story is just so good and the first of it's kind that I found and like very much! Please consider make it into a series! Thank you for your time :p :)
Shadow of a Memory chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
Awesome concept and an excellent start. Really disappointed it's not going to continue though
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
This. Is. Amazing. But please make Sasuke turn good in the end, okay? I don't think I could bear more todture of him being permanently evil! I mean, when he was a toddler he was still kind, it was his family dying that ultimately changed him, and I don't think he deserves to become evil because of bad things that happened to him. I still need to read the rest of the chapters, but please consider this, ttebayo! Thanks for all your hard work!
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