OOOH! I CRAVE MOAR. OMG FRANNY. WHATTAH BEAUTIFUL HALFY.

You have a pretty writing cycle. As if you're telling a story, which, in a way, I guess you are. The atmosphere makes it feel like you really are in a bar, or an inn, and someone is telling the story to a group of wide-eyed children, who are unfortunate enough to have pass rum and gin and beer to the man (or woman). It is...interesting and unique. Yes, yes it is.

Goodnight, and please continue.

Well... isn't Arthur a little young to be Captain? How did he become one? Can't wait for a update!

MWIIIIIIII! *FLAIL*

*hands a bottle of rum* I'm listening~

lol I see that you already have plenty of rhum, but I'll just sit here if you don't mind P

*hands bottle of rum*

OMNOMNOM I CRAVE MOAR.

Anyway, dearie, I quite like it when people write like you had just done. It catches my attention. c:

(but we have one problem - I'M ALREADY ATTATCHED TO FRANCIS... FRANCOIS. WHATEVER)

Update soon, it seems interesting! :DD

Well! This story looks cool! I love the imagery you use at the beginning. It really just sets the mood for the whole thing in general; Francis, or rather, Francois here, is not human, and this story might not have a happy ending. A really great start to the story, I want to read more. -hands rum- Okay, ready!

*hands you the bottle* Ay~

This should b interesting...

*sits down* *passes bottle of rum*

I'm ready to listen now!