I have been reading alot of your work...and take this with a grain of salt but i have to say that it frustrates me a lot...it frustrates me that non of your work is complete...it seems like u come up with a lot of great ideas but u just end up giving up all of the time...it is sad really...because ur ideas are great most of the time...and even if some have flaws its still good for a great plotline and great story...i have really liked a lot of your stories...they are different and unique on their own..

Now i think that u give up because either the amount of hits on ur story or the comments about the flaws...but ask yourself this...was the plot of the cannon naruto perfect...was everything mashashi kishimoto wrote perfect ? There are thousand of flaws in his story...things that doesnt make sense...but he owned it...it was his story to tell...some liked it some didnt...but he completed it...you should own yours...its urs to tell...doesnt matter if people dont agree with it...but the satisfaction u get when u finish ur work is great...and it makes me sad watching all of ur stories abandoned...so many ideas gone to waste...in the bin when it could have been a piece of art...

So i encourage u to finish one story u like the most...just one...and then maybe u will find motiavtion to finish the others...good luck and i hope for the best in ur future work

Great job please continue the story

When will we continue?

I would like Naruto to accept that he is engaged to Mai and that husband and becomes pregnant and full of children ...

L'intrigue est pas mal mais je n'accepte pas le truc avec neiji car que vont dire les anciens quand il va perdre va fausse au dernier de la classe de la classe suivante .

Please update soon!

you ficking copycat

I am done with this fanfic. Mildly interesting, very predictable from the new race point on and extremely furstrating to read.

update please

Like it. Update and keep up the good work!

Constructive criticism 1 go back and rewrite this damn thing oh I don't want to hear if you don't like it don't read it I got the message if you don't like Naruto don't want to show but just messages go back and read write this damn thing you do it much better it looks really mature is why I even bother complaining its a bunch of amateur fanfic out of

awesome story. i really like all the detail put into this story, and i can actually see this happening in the story because of it. please update bye bye

Otha kundi born

I came here to read about Mei and Naruto. Instead, I'm greeted with some fantasy shit about an extinct race called the Highborn. No thanks, and judging from the other reviews about how Naruto's personality shifts into a typical elitist Uchiha douche bag, no thanks. Next time, inform the reader about your story better, this highborn crap is a pretty big part of the story.

Vaguely interesting but mostly frustrating to read.
Naruto is a pretty serious douchebag from all appearances. It seems turning into a highborn made him into an elitist racist (specist?)... basically every aspect that people hate about Sasuke, the Hyuuga and the rest of the stuckup bloodline fags in Naruto, you instead encourage. It'd be like if this was Harry Potter and it turned out that the purebloods were right and all muggleborns are born with weaker magic...
And the garbage about how clans bloodlines weaken over time from inbreeding... it's like something straight out of a nazi fiction novel.

"Their memories contained limitless techniques, magics that would make ninjutsu seem like a civilians plaything, rituals, weapons, the answers to so many questions…the Origin of the Bijuu themselves."

Two lines later...

"He needed to escape, even as powerful as he was now, he knew without the knowledge to use the power he had obtained, there was no way he could fight off whoever was coming."

Could this be any more of a contradiction?