| Reviews for Girl Next Door |
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Guest chapter 8 . 2/7 It's good you stopped the story cause it's stupid! Bloody tell dursleys what hermione is then dursleys back off, i bet hermione told her parents what harry's life is. Then they would have taken action maybe take him in. No bloody way even if he promised you go through the damn summer without doing things together. |
LoveHHr05 chapter 5 . 2/10/2019 You suck so hard |
Berenice chapter 1 . 9/7/2017 It is Hermione Jean Granger |
Gregory Hanssen chapter 8 . 7/27/2017 You are a true writer, thank you for the up date. |
kyuki619 chapter 2 . 2/22/2015 AWWWEEEEE4 SOOO CUTE HERMIONE! SHE TOTALLY IN LOVE WITH HIM |
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 2 . 5/26/2012 nice chapter |
uwishuwerecool chapter 2 . 5/7/2012 s/7332790/2/Girl_Next_Door this is like the same |
jazziisms chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 I love how they pretended they just met :) |
JazzGirl123 chapter 8 . 8/27/2011 Oh, wow. Thanks; I honestly didn't expect to be picked. And I'll put it up...but only for a while b/c I use my BFF's email and I don't want to make her mad by cluttering her mailbox. I'll try and get the first chapter up as soon as I can. Scool is starting soon too (eighth grade, whoopee. One more year until the drama of high school...no offense), so updating may get tricky but I'll try my best. |
Poptart X chapter 1 . 8/20/2011 This is already getting good! :DDD |
JazzGirl123 chapter 7 . 8/20/2011 Of course people would volunteer to continue the story; it's too good to die! Can't wait for the next AN. |
DestroyerDRT chapter 5 . 8/10/2011 The way people are putting this in their Favorite Stories is most likely so they will know if you allow some one to adopt it or if you rewrite it. |
Patty Potter-Pevensie chapter 5 . 8/10/2011 Oh , I'd be glad to take over this story for you , if you'd like . I'd like to try my hand at it . (: PM me back about anything regarding your answer and ... stuff ... xD Love, ~Patteh |
Jarno chapter 6 . 8/10/2011 Seems a bit pointless to review but oh well, in all honnestly, I didn't see the point of your plot. Or I did, but not the way you wrote it. Hermione moving in next to Harry is a nice twist... if you actually do something with it. A 'girl next door' fic would resolve around Harry actually spending time with that girl (regardless who that girl is.) This time spent would then change Harry's summer or even change his character. (For example, a summer spent with Hemione could make Harry more responsible. He could lean more towards Hermione and less towards lazy Ron which would make him a better wizard.) If you have Harry interacting with the girl next door two times and then his normal summer starts, then your plot twist is useless since it doesn't change anything. So my advice: if you ever write a future girl next door fic, then actually write about Harry interacting with the girl next door.(be it possibly with someone else than Hermione since you apparently like Ron/Hermione which I never really understood. A couple made of an extremely ambitious, hard working girl and a lazy guy with an inferiority complex a mile wide. Yes it makes for interesting situations and drama but it's not a realistic relationship.) |
Spartan Ninja chapter 5 . 8/10/2011 Aw. :( |