Closing up a lot of story arcs you are ...

They have won the war - now they will have win the peace: the hardest job is still ahead.

Very well written and a pleasure to read.

One of those few stories that ran their course and actually ended. 8 years in the making. Sadly, not many ppl read itit is a real shame. I would like to congratulate you, atlatniaCAG, on a job well done and story well-written. Cheers.

So there is a cliffhanger ending.

I reread the whole (complete?) story until now in one go: this is really impressive.

Many of your characters appear to be really emotionally driven and and seem to be unable to stop themselves doing whatever is their do.

This conveys a sense of inevitability to the reader in following the stories' plot arcs over multiple chapters.

Apart from some very,very minor but still notable spelling issues (which I still insist to remark upon) your writing is extraordinarily polished.

That Buck is such a frakking hero ;-)

An action and drama heavy chapter. I especially liked the part where the tendrils ripped from her face. Kind of like a nightmare inducing hybrid of the Borg and a Xenomorph.

Well done buddy.

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Declaring Hunter and Skeeter cursed. They and the cockroaches will be the only survivors in the end, unless one loves roaches, then they are in danger also.
As always, looking forward to the next chapter.

I got a real "Panic Room" vibe when Maxwell was speaking to them while they watched on the camera. 10 grenades! Give Private Kirk a raise. Wow, what a tense chapter. Very fast paced too when the action starts. Great job.

excellent story atlantiaCAG

Lov.

Good chapter, shame the General has such a shitty son, but i still love it, it does remind me of other BSG FF since alliance usually appears at some point, but you are handling it perfectly. Cant wait to see next chapter!

It's not so much racist to Aquarian's, she just hates the actual planet, not necessarily the people! hahahaha ;)

Nothing like a happy, bloodthirsty ending mate. Also, why is Penny racist against Aquarians :D

Well done mate. Nice to see you pressing on with it. Fancy ghostwriting Hermes for me? :D

Glad to see continued progress so many of the good BSG stories have been forgotten. Silas and Max seem to have crossed their lines in their last scene, but still easy enough to figure out. Liked the tribute to Wes also. Very nice touch.

I do like this story, most of it is well done, That is why the Mexican standoff in CH25 made me think WTF?

Sorry you didn't like it Keith. I appreciate any and all feedback.