WELP. Im dying internally now.
TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

HOLY SHIT!

Omg this is great. This is the perfect sort of fan fiction I like to read and it is amazing

Well done setting everything up so it makes sense this is well wrote and it's very clear what's going on. I'm impressed

so frustrated. it angers me that you portrayed ben as weak as you did. did he forget that he has access to tjhe powers of a literal GOD!? not to mention any number of aliens which could have helped him escape. Waybig for instance. Ghostfreak for another. It's inconceivable that he would be held captive without first disabling the omnitrix.

the story was OK but when Ben said he was gay so quick don't you think he got into dating too quick because he broke up with Julie it was too soon but it good thou

I'm just confused now, the beginning made no sense and felt like I was hopping into a conversion half way through and couldn't tell who was all where or what

I liked the first chapter then the second killed it (in a bad way). Frankly I think a bit more subtlety would have been better, its easy to make a female a raging bitch but it would have been better to see a cool calculated attack on Gwen's part. Have her walk up to her best friend and say something like "Oh Julie didn't know you were gonna be here but oh my who's this? Your boyfriend? Well I'm sure your current boyfriend Ben will be more then understanding but I don't remember hearing about the break up" new guy gets upset then freaks out and leaves and Gwen coldly walks off. And the end you could have had Ben said even if he's bi he's done with woman and will day men from now on rather then him saying he was gay instead would have worked the heart broken angle much better rather then him claiming he suddenly changed his sexuality which sits as well as oil mixes with water but that's just me *shrugs*

This fanfic is awesome. I would like to read a sequel about Ben and Kevin and asshole return for revenge. Or something about Ben having a child with Kevin. Or asshole returns but instead going after Ben because he is too powerful he goes after Kevin or their child. To get through Ben. Ok I'll should stop or I'll keep on typing forever. Your a great writer cant wait to read more of your fanfics. If you like any of these ideas used them. If not it's fine. Keep up the great work.

Bull Shit You bastard why damn it why gay damn You

Hi, I know you finished this in 2012 but I just now had the luck to stumble across this awesome piece of writing concerning Kevin and Ben.

And may I just tell you, by chapter four you had me cursing at that scumbag douche before he even did ANYTHING to Ben. That is how awesome you are. But dang, the fairy tale story, you really got me believing that the scumbag was going to be the one and only prince for Ben (which I believe said scumbag will still defend even with his ass in prison like a common criminal). You gave the smallest of hints that the story was going to have a total one-eighty and I have to salute you for that. I would have dropped hints all over the place.

I don't wanna go all girly-girl on you for too long but I have to say that the ending was good. It suits the story, not too emotional -just sweet. Please imagine me sighing in absolute happiness here haha. Lovely, lovely ending. If you had left the story up till chapter 19, oh the emotional surge readers would have, I could only imagine!

I should stop here. Know that this writing here, is a piece someone would treasure. It is indeed a rare treat.

Truly;
Nickaustin90

What the fuck is this Ben go from m being a girls lover into a boy's lover still fucking trying get this straight

Freaking epic story! ThIs keep me on the edge of my seat almost through the whole story.

That was one of the cutest things I have ever read! I liked Jason at first, but then he went all crazy psycho bastard and all that.
And I have a question, as long as I give you full credit to the idea, can I borrow your male anodyte idea? I'm writing my own Ben 10 fic and there was something missing and I think this is it

I like the logic reasoning. Not a lot of people would consider it that way and would only make him gay for the sake of their story (not that they're bad, this just has more reasoning).