Should so continue this

This one was pretty deep, almost cynical, but still awesome. Your style is so versatile it's like two people in one. Excellent, five stars!

Hm, I find myself not as interested in this, but it's probably because it has to do with birth. Birth stories have never been my favorite. But it was good! I'm sure someone has/will review(ed) who likes birth stories.

The emotions came through in the writing, but the facts were off.

Not the fear that many women have of being unable to love their children, or the tragic occurances of women who kill their children. The facts you wrote about the Naruto world were off.

A. Asuma *did* know that Kurenai was pregnant before he died. The information came out in his message to Shikamaru that the King (referring to Shougi) of Konoha that all shinobi must protect are the children and unborn children of Konoha; also, in Shikamaru's declaration that he promised Asuma that he would take care of Asuma's unborn child right before Asuma was killed.

B. Kurenai is not from Suna; in a recently revealed flashback in the manga, her father was revealed to be a Konoha Shinobi, and there's no reason to think Kurenai was born anywhere else.

I'm sorry if I'm nitpicking, I just feel that despite the fact that the piece was emotional and well written overall, it did not accurately represent Kurenai or her relationship with Asuma, unless you meant it as an AU.

That's KINDA CREEPY. I'm not sure what to feel.