Reviews for The Space Between
Tropicallight chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
So I decided to read every story of yours. There are going to be lot of reviews in next few days XD
I really liked it!
Kat-N chapter 1 . 4/25/2019
Another one... So sweet and lovely, but so short! I think this part of the story, with she being held as hostage and all that, is a good source of fanfic material. I would love to see more of it, if you happen to have any more ideas about it. Still, and even if I would have liked it to be longer, this one goes to favouritesKeep writing!
July Storms chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
Aww, this was sweet. You write these two's interactions well; they engage in a lot of intimate touching but never so much as to not fit within the boundaries the canon seems to have set. Thanks for another cute read. :)
Laceisoverrated chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
This is exactly how I always thought they would act in private. Simple and subtle, just comfortable in knowing what is left unsaid without having to say it. So many fics have trouble showing this deep connection and end up resorting to fluff. I've just finished rewatching the anime and (after remembering ) immersed myself in reading fic after fic for the past week, and I just wanted to let you know that your writing has been really enjoyable and satisfying, and it adds to the FMA world that I really want to stay in right now.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
While reading listen to "Hello I'm In Delaware" by City and Colour

Love, Rin
NillyNarwhal chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Lovely story. I've read a few of your other Royai stories and I've noticed you're able to reach this perfect balance between them which I absolutely love. It's subtle, but speaks volumes.
jessi chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Great story!
eriah chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Simply Amazing.

I read this and picture all of this really happening.

I'd like to imagine it did since we didn't see them for a number of episodes, i'm sure this is what really happened! :D
SeaSaltChocolate chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I read your amazing story and marvel at its brilliance- the bittersweet romance and friendship, the smoothness, the way the plot flowed, the way you expressed their emptions without long, rambling narratives, the very way you kept the chatacters in line as themselves... and then I go see how many reveiws you have. There are so many shallow people out there who need a fast paced plot to get them through a story. Ignore them. Your writing is amazing; you truly are gifted. I have a friend who's an amazing writer like you, and no one bothers to read her stories.

Im blabbing again. My main point is, even if you don't get hundreds of reveiws, you deserve them. So please, don't stop writing. I want to see you writing an authprs note one day that says, "im sorry, but I can't continue this- its finally been published!"
The Girl is Silver chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I've recently gotten into Fullmetal Alchemist, and I have to say that Roy and Riza are truly my favorite couple. It's so nice to read a story about them that genuinely captures their relationship-especially one that's so well-written!
Caffeinated Night Shift chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
This was wonderful. I love how subtle yet implicit you made their relationship. This scene could have easily fit in at some point in the story. ]
nochanceinheck chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Love this! I have always adored Roy and Riza's relationship...such as it is. Arakawa doesn't really give us much to go on, does she? Anyway, this is a very sweet story, and I had to laugh at Roy's decoy strategy. It's just like him to pull something like that:)
dandoune chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Such a heartbreaking relationship they share... That was well done :) I hope you'll write more royai!
LilDemonWarrior chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Nothing to extravagant, just soft and sweet. They were amazingly well in character, especially the way Roy fooled his tail using Christmas' girls. And I simply loved how their moment together was heart-warming and at bitter the same time. :) Like the previous reviewer said, please keep writting; you're amazing.
hjfdkg chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Oh, I loved this so much. It was extremely well-written and characterized; the story flowed neatly and the narrative was easy to follow, but above all, I loved how perfectly you characterized these two. I liked the mention you gave to the other characters and how the actual world of FMA tied in so neatly to this story. The bittersweet ending was touching and memorable. Amazing, amazing job. Keep writing, you're very talented. :)